In a Perfect World

by TenderBabeLoveland, Colorado, USA

Apr 2011 628 Views 14 comments

In a Perfect World

In a perfect world we would be sharing a warm sunny day
Watching a bird on a telephone-poll taking in the rays.
Kissing and hugging,
Laughing and cuddling.
This is what I wish would be
My perfect world is you and me.

by KF
© copyright 2011~ Wednesday, March 23rd.

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Posted: Apr 2011

About this poem:

I was inspired by a special love of mine.

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Comments (14)

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaApr 18, 2011

!smiling! and in a perfect world...... people would mean what they say... and say what they mean...Ah in a perfect world... nice poem......... Thanks........

TenderBabeOPLoveland, Colorado USAApr 18, 2011

Thank you. You are so right. In a perfect world everyone would have a perfect love.

TenderBabeOPLoveland, Colorado USAApr 18, 2011

Thank you. You are so right. In a perfect world everyone would have a perfect love.

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaApr 18, 2011

My perfect world is you and me.

This is the point of the poem. Love it!

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 18, 2011

TenderBabe

I wouldn't be seen, dead, in a Perfect World.

A Fun world, is what your words convey to me, lovingly.

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAApr 18, 2011

Sounds like you're having some fun in this perfect world - cool write tenderbabe

TenderBabeOPLoveland, Colorado USAApr 18, 2011

I am having fun in my Perfect World. :-)'s

Swan87Syria, QatarApr 19, 2011

Loved your Perfect World .. Wanna have mine too .. !

Thanks alot for such a lovely poem &
nice meeting you

Swan

TenderBabeOPLoveland, Colorado USAApr 19, 2011

Thank you Swan. Nice meeting you as well.

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAApr 19, 2011

LOL do you think your font is pretty small, hunny?? TenderBabe LOL

I LOVED YOUR PERFECT WORLD!!!!!

^____________^ It's 100% sweeeet!!! ^__________^ wherever your heart/love is, that's a 'perfect' place/world!!!!

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Thank you for sharing!!!