Broken: Where do I start?

Battered and Beaten torn inbetween
Frightened and alone falling on my knees
Pray for brighter days, whats left to come
I don't know the way Lord, oh I feel numb
Faith where are you? Hiding from me..
Hope is gone also, love, and my family
Tears of sorrow, heart with darkness and pain
What more can you take from me, what is there to gain?
My knees are sore from praying endlessly
Time to pick up the pieces where do I start...God help me!
I'm battered and beaten, torn inbetween
So help me God i'm starting today, i'm getting on my knees....
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Posted: May 2011
About this poem:
this was the time my brother died in 2009, i just picked up my pen and my book, started writing to release everything i had inside and how i felt, just torn and hurt, the pain was so great it felt like someone physically punched me all over.

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agoodguy2have
shellbi, an open explanation of the hurt / grief felt when we lose one so close to us. thank you for your sharing this with us. we all get through in our own way, in our own time. ;-|
shellbi
thank you for reading my poem and yes it does take time for healing but it eventually gets there
Nuwahri61
hey shellbi.... i've walked in your shoes so i penned something for you Tears of Joy ......... hope you like it ....regards cool
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