STAR FALLEN PROMISE

STAR FALLEN PROMISE

It was hard to watch you pirouette
with your goliath-sized demon
-romancing your inner death each fall-away day

the matador dancing a dangerous lie
the crushed flower beneath preoccupied feet
looked a little like me, in a curious way.

Against the red red sun your silhouette
burned hard your darkling image into my eye
so that not even in sleep would you fade away.

Await on the threshold of some greater cause,
I teetered, not knowing which way to freefall;
in a chasm the size of the Milky Way
~you stamped out your nameā€¦
~Oh~ I guess that was my soul, after all.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2011

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Redex
(so that) not even in sleep would you fade away

Another lovely poem but I think it drew out sadness in me.
An excellant poem again starfire girl.
I also loved (I teetered not knowing which way to freefall)
You have some lovely phrases in your poetry.teddybear
steve1223
I teetered and did freefall through your poem and came out the other side breathless....thank you
marikia
This poem deserves a wide acclaim, as does all your poetry. You are an accomplished poet, a master of pen. "... so that not even in sleep would you fade away..." - lost love leaves indelible marks, poignant memories remain, "stamped out" they are as you put it in a way characteristic for your style. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us! hug bouquet
starfire_girl
thank you for all of your wonderful commentary!
:)
Poetnumber1
wow choir choir choir choir choir choir choir choir angel2,this is superb writing,you leave me breathless. I thought you used some words that just raised the energy in your poem,it was really awesome,i don't know about others,but i really did enjoy reading this,with you the author's permission, can i borrow one of your phrases laugh .yay bouquet
jazzy75
Striking! Felt it in my bones....this fantastic write! gift
country_lady67
bouquet purple heart Absolutely beautiful..
starfire_girl
You are a most honorable poet and writer to ask permission to borrow a phrase from another...You raise the bar! Which line intrigues you? I am most curious!
starfire_girl
All of us have fallen, at one time or another, into the vast and formless field of infinite love, the kind that has opened our souls to a tenderness that can not be spoken. We are all joined at the heart. Thank you all so much for your kind words.
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