Could you just listen??

could you just listen to me and please don't say any words, please only listen!!
I want you to think back to the first time we met!
How you felt around me? The memories we shared,
an understanding smile, pleased smile and sweet words from you !!
And just remember you really cared about me!!
How's about now?.....

But please don't say any words coz you will come up with a beautiful lying words!!
so please be quiet and listen!!

Now I want you to know that my heart broke bit by bit.
The pain was deep, unbearable and so painful!!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2009
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I wrote this one!!

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moonlove
Just write this poem,innocent innocent
gypsyheart
Such honest words from your heart moonlove hug teddybear
sabeel
dear poet moonlove,
if you like moon, or if you are a moon ? there is no need to worry about past experience. bcuz a moon is loveble light, every one like moon. it gives others happy and good thoughts about life and experience.
i like , you must be a moon, not even get its name .....
sabeel.sad flower bouquet
moonlove
Thanks for nice comments...!! Have a great day!!bouquet
oversea
that's so sadcomfort comfort hug
boyshchrm6
moonlove: Part of life. The pain will pass.angel
moonlove
hehe, thanks, ...I'm alrightgrin beer
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