He is going to walk away that is for sure His things are packed and at the door His memories are in the bedroom still His watch tells him five minutes to kill He turns around, open his arms just once more One last time he hopes his memories will cure
She watched him packed heard his excuses Knew it was not time for tears or abuses But she felt the embers dying inside Knew her heart was torn open wide She saw him turn around and hoped One last time she wish she could cope
One last time lasted all night and a day Together they climb the stars in foreplay Loved the clouds back to their linings of silver They shook, they slept and loved every shiver Each knowing that yet again they have lost Like they have done so many times in the past
One last time they carried his luggage in Unpacked and threw the wash back in the bin They never made any promises just agreed That once more grief their lives have freed How long neither knows nor do they really care This last time might be a week, a day, a month or a year
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 13, 2011
Great work! So intense..I wonder if they can keep surviving 'one last time..' r o m a n t i c..
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 13, 2011
I will have to agree with cafe,this is intense and romantic,love the depths,the picture you painted,you set the scene for a fantastic story,cheers to you
kle76amOPnew york, New York USAAug 13, 2011
Cafe I will check in on them again maybe..........
kle76amOPnew york, New York USAAug 13, 2011
P#1 I never intentionally went romantic but I guess that is partly true glad you guys liked it.......maybe a part 2.....thinking about it!
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