Here comes rain

by madtat29Farmington, New Mexico, USA

Aug 2011 429 Views 9 comments

Here comes the rain...

I'm sitting alone,
I'm thinking of you...
I'm so tired of lies,
I'm tired of truth,
I don't know what to do ,
I don't know what to say,
I'm tired of hurting,
I'm tired of pain,
Like everyday is the same,
And here comes the rain...
I've got tears in my eyes,
I've got you on my mind,
All these thoughts of the life,
That I left behind,
I remember a time,
When you and me were alive,
And everything wasn't right,
But everything was okay,
Now everyday is the same,
Here comes the rain...
I can't take anymore,
It's there again and again,
Yeah I see what I said,
And I know what I did,
Now I know that I lost,
More than I'll ever win,
Still I say to my friends,
"Yeah, everything is okay.",
But everyday it's the same..,
Here comes the rain.

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Posted: Aug 2011

About this poem:

This one flowed like a faucet,
When I wrote it...

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Comments (9)

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusAug 25, 2011

very nostalgic, my friend, thanks for honoring us with your deep humanity, much appreciated...

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAAug 25, 2011

The words do flow madtat

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAJan 31, 2014

Thank you Earl and Ladybee...I've since turned this into a song...found the rhythm ..need some music...sounds good in the shower..lol

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 31, 2014

This poem screams at me, I'm hearing you mad, hang in there, it will pass, sometimes with blades but it will pass, go get another tattoo and sit and soak in that constant touch of the needle, you can feel it, feeling is what makes you keep moving forward, having emotions help you keep going, intense and beautifully written,

Angie

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 31, 2014

wow, wow, mad,
intense, gut-wrenching, honest, from the depths.
there's intense sadness to this yet equal of beauty,,,
to be able to express such inner experience with
such clarity is gift! thanks for sharing it with us