Every stop along the road has led me to other people with a great heart, Trying to change my path as I plotted coordinates on a chart. Just when I thought this was different it ended just like the rest, Leaving me sitting on the floor crying and a pain in my chest. One day I will find the right one for me just like everyone says I will, However for now that seems much farther away at this point still. So for now I keep running on this path of life trying to reach my goal, With the hopes that along the way I will bring along a soulmate with a beautiful soul.
The wording in your poems are really beautiful. you have some original ideas and that is rare. But, free yourself from the rhyme. just feel and write. your words will come. You are truly gifted.
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaOct 22, 2011
aaaaaaaaaaai agree with Irishmoon. You are truly gifted. I missed these and they well deserve comment
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 22, 2011
Very nice writing MaxxHeart. Thank you for sharing this
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