Belong

by Fee16Angouleme, Nouvelle-Aquitaine, France

Sep 2011 485 Views 10 comments

Belong

Author: Fee16

Id like to think that i belong amongst
so many who are so strong

but in my thoughts all i can see
is just the fear i feel in me

so here i am alone inside
its just a dream from which i hide

and who's to say its right or wrong
to feel such things and not belong

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Posted: Sep 2011

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Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 30, 2011

Hi Fee16,thanks for sharing a lovely write. Often times we feel as though we don't belong because we stand out as being different or simply because we don't fit in. Welcome to Poets Corner

,hope to read more from you

elo69santa cruz, California USASep 30, 2011

be welcome here, for we are all at times strangers alone in are own minds.......elo.....

JanzeIndianapolis, Indiana USASep 30, 2011

Fee, you have created much in eight lines. I would like to read more of such an introspective mind. Janze

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USASep 30, 2011

Sounds like the kind of pressure that we put ourselves through when we want to impress our peers.

One thing is for certain.... you do belong amongst those who are strong, but you also belong amongst those who are weak.... to select one without the other would be placing yourself in a whole new world!!! Welcome to LIFE!!! P.S. - You're a beautiful woman!!

TEKA8Big Spring, Texas USASep 30, 2011

Very good poem

TRJohnMorrow, Georgia USAOct 1, 2011

I really like the title of your poem. Your poem made me think that just as I am strong there are times I feel I'm really not very strong. But, this is okay as I am evolving, growing and bettering my best everyday because I am not the woman I was yesterday nor, the woman I'll be tomorrow.

Thanks for your beautiful soul-searching poem.

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 1, 2011

Nice Poem Fee16, I guess a lot of us would recognised ourselves in your words :) Nice to read you