love poem (more than)

when i look into your eyes,
i see more than you or me,
i dont find a material prize,
the elysian feilds are what i see,

when i touch your perfect skin,
i dont just feel you milky flesh,
i feel your precious soul within,
with which any man you could impress,

when i see your lucious hair,
i see the silk from a seamstess hand,
a sense of joy takes over despair,
and im away in a better land,

your stunning smile, your perfect laugh,
but from one thing ill never part,
its more than beauty, a sacred path,
that one thing your precious heart,

for me, my time is measured by two,
time without and time with you,

i know your to good and im not enough,
but accept me as i am, and give me my rush,
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
this is about noone in partcular,
just was in the mood to write something.

(well noone ive seen anyway)

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Comments (2)

swade777
For being so young, you've shown some real talent in expressive writing! Let's see some more of your creativity!!!thumbs up
jhass9
i would post more, but most of them can be a bit depressing, let me know if you want to see them.
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