Autumn dance

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Oct 2011 425 Views 13 comments

Autumn dance

Author: cafetwo2010

Golden leaves of yellow and
brown perform their dance
on windy ground
Barren limbs watch their
children play
To Autumns dance they
joyfully sway
Under frosty blankets
in valleys deep
Withering leaves lay
down to sleep
And this swirling chorus
of gold and green
Close their eyes in
a winters dream~

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Posted: Oct 2011

About this poem:

Natures beauty..

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Comments (13)

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAOct 22, 2011

Beautiful poem, Cafe. I could easily picture the turn of the season. One of my favorite times of year.

lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 22, 2011

umm...nice it is still hot here in Texas cafe and your poem is a nice reminder of what is coming soon! nice description of fall!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Cloudy..' thank you dear. I wrote this one out several times to keep the meaning tight and simple..Just sitting on my back porch trying to contribute an Autumn poem.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Lucy..' I could always mail you a leaf or two.

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandOct 22, 2011

This piece has beautiful rhythm and rhyme, a fine autum dance depicting the beauty of the season.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty thelma..' I'm actually happy with the way this one turned out.

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAOct 22, 2011

Jim, an aewsome poem reflecting the same awesome beauty of the Creator that you credited my own poem with a few days ago. Isn't it great to be able to write beautiful things about the beauty of nature. EXCELLENT contribution to the corner my friend!!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty Swade..' Thank you my friend. It's a blessing and great joy to find the right expressions or seemingly so.Happy October!

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaOct 22, 2011

I adore your poems, cafetwo2010, although I don't comment them often. Maybe I am a bit afraid to say anything about such a beauty of words. And dance of autumn leaves is such an isnpiration, affecting all our senses. Great picture of it!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 22, 2011

Another beautiful poem Cafe.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 22, 2011

Loved it cafe....really did...Kathy

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 22, 2011

Ty niah..' Glad to hear from you dear. I thought you eloped with one of our savy knights.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandOct 22, 2011

Savy knights...LOL....I know the village has polo soon by the harbour....will they count for knights on horseback...trouble is, I bet they won't be riding polo ponies in a rural area...more like farm hacks....