Victim Is

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Oct 2011 484 Views 16 comments

Victim I's

Author: cafetwo2010

Many are the reasons for our
hanging heads and sighs
A litany of woes for all our
Victim I's
'He said, She said,' it's
all in the game
No need to write the list
cause they all sound the
same~

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Posted: Oct 2011

About this poem:

self responsibility..

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Comments (16)

lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 24, 2011

so true cafe! thanks for sharing

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 24, 2011

Ty Lucy..' I think I'm a victim of 'The spell of the fair maiden.' I'll need plenty of nursing..

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 24, 2011

True CafeTwo...people should be willing to take
responsibility rather than bunch of excuses.
I too think I am feeling piccid....need care
and nursing also.....owwwwwwww!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 24, 2011

Ty boyshchrm6..' Point well taken. We didn't forget about you. I'm sending the Old Hag over to your place tonight. Trust me. She's gonna fix you up realllll good! She wants to run her axe worn hands through those locks of yours. After that Kickit will show up and the Hag Feast will be on! Oh yeah! That's what I'm talkin' about!

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 24, 2011

You are so right my friend. There'sno excuse to avoid our own responsabilities. Life is hard for everyone... and respect a must. Well said my friend :)

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 24, 2011

Ty Ayhra..' I guess this was a note to myself. I had to throw away the list..

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 25, 2011

I agree, no need for listing the wrongs done, cause we all are more or less guilty of wrongdoing - we all "sound the same," we all are the culprits, some of us don't even guess, but being unaware of laws doesn't exonerate from paying penalty. No hanging of head, no sighing

, my friend, just carry on as usual. Many thanks for sharing this simple jam of wisdom!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 25, 2011

Many are the reasons for our
hanging heads and sighs
A litany of woes for all our
Victim I's
'He said, She said,' it's
all in the game
No need to write the list
cause they all sound the
same~

One word Cafe...EXCELLENT!

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 25, 2011

Hi Cafe

In this brief vignette, you say it all.... A fine write!

Bill

online today!

ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandOct 25, 2011

Wow! it says it all, love it! nice write...