Love and Lace

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Oct 2011 658 Views 21 comments

Love and Lace

Author: cafetwo2010

What can I give to the break
of dawn that it lacks of a
brighter morn
Where lack the gifts to the
blackest night that a million
stars adorn
How has my hand held the sun
and moon and kept them in
their place
By wisdoms joy has this heavenly
garment been sown in love's
sweet lace~

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Posted: Oct 2011

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Comments (21)

thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandOct 27, 2011

Dear Cafe, Love is intricate and exquisite like lace. Wonderful indeed!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 27, 2011

Ty thelma..'Thank you dear.

SundaySilenceLittle Gasparilla, Florida USAOct 27, 2011

You woke up to a serene mood. I'm still shaking from all the zombies I encountered last night. I pulled the note out but the canned speach didn't go over to well.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 27, 2011

Ty Sunday..' Hand those zombies this poem the next time they mess with you. It'll confuse them.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 27, 2011

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 27, 2011

Wonderfully worded CafeTwo.
Nice flow.

lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 27, 2011

well done cafe!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 27, 2011

Ty Odette..' Thank you dear..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 27, 2011

Ty boy6..' This one seems to fit rather well. Thank you my friend.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 27, 2011

Ty Lucy..' Thank you sweet.

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKOct 27, 2011

A lovely delicate..yet intricate poem of love Cafe.. many thanks for sharing..

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaOct 28, 2011

Beautiful, cafetwo2010, and amazing, too. Beside your power to express what you see and feel in a poetic form, you have so delicate emotions. Does it necessarily go together? I don't know...

Thanks and best wishes.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 28, 2011

Ty vyoleta..' Thank you dear for reading. For me it's a matter of trying to connect the right feeling with the right thought in the way I'm personally expericing it, and not in terms of how I think it's suppose to sound. I listen to my own self-talk and actually try to write down exactly what I just said to myself and try to describe something that actually touches me in a real way with no thought to words or style. The words seem to take care of themselves when I am true to the experience. Thank you dear.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 28, 2011

Ty Lady Morgan..' Thank you dear..