When I feel alone and forsaken, and hang my head and sigh When the mirror catches a wistful tear under this wrinkled eye When my crazy dreams are beyond a hill to steep for me to climb When I've lost my way to that happier life which seems I'll never find When the laughter of children reminds me of me when I was full of life and hope When the years have taken their toll on my heart and no longer can I cope When everything between yesterday and tommorow seems like fading grass When the harder I run to catch my future I'm dragged deeper into my past When the seasons change under these darkened skys and a new flower has sprung When I wonder what my life has meant under this firey sun When the millions that have gone before me lie silent in the dust When I wonder if the good they've done has been held in a sacred trust When the beauty of all creation has intoxicated my imagination When I wonder if I'll remember those stars that fortold my destination When God has fought the last battle for the hearts and minds of men When I wonder if these words I write shall live and breathe again When all the trouble between heaven and earth has been called into account When the warriors and the peacemakers have been paid in full amount When my feeble thoughts are compelled to kneel to the truth that shall never fall Then shall I see my maker face to face as the greatest wonder of all~
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 4, 2011
As you already know, there's time for everything in this life Cafe2, and it's ok :) Beautiful expressed, so emotional and human. Love it *Big Hug* my friend
Wow Cafe2! Loved it. Great expressions of life and memories. Really enjoyed this one, very moving.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 5, 2011
Dear Cafe, I am sure many of us older poets can identify with this most excellent poem]
Footsteps
"Lord, you said that once I decided to follow you, you would walk with me all the way. But I notice that during the most troublesome times in my life there is only one set of footprints. I don't understand why you left my side when I needed you most." The Lord said: "My precious child, I never left you during your time of trial. Where you see only one set of footprints, I was carrying you.
thelmatallaGeneva, SwitzerlandNov 5, 2011
An excellent thought provoking piece Dear Cafe! Absolutely WONDERful!
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 5, 2011
This is a great write
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
TY Ayhra..' thank you most sensitive fair maiden..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Ty Cloudy..' thank you sweetness..
JanzeIndianapolis, Indiana USANov 5, 2011
Jim, my words have no ability to speak adequately about this poem. A superb and moving effort! Simple marvelous! Janze
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Ty Odette..' That poem you just recited is sooo famous..love it. Thanks dearest maiden.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Mr. Fellsman..' Your being a much more experienced poet I highly value your analysis of my work. I'm striving for true excellence and trying to put some real meat into my work. Thank you for your highly encouraging and gracious comment.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Thank you Thelma dear. You have just been sent three tickets to the castles secret party.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Thank you Steve..Based on the magnificient output of your work this is a compliment indeed..thanks bro.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Thank you Janze..' My words fail to express my thankfulness for your kind comments. Hope I can keep an enduring quality in my work. I'm getting older now so I hope I don't forget where I left my computer.
lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USANov 5, 2011
as with all your work cafe I LOVE IT!
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 5, 2011
Your poetry flows like a river here cafe2.Poured onto the page. Love it.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Ty Lucy..Thanks much dear. Much appreciated.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2011
Ty Moontide..' Hope the river doesn't run dry sweet. Thanks for your wonderful compliments.
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Footsteps
"Lord, you said that once I decided to follow you, you would walk with me all the way. But I notice that during the most troublesome times in my life there is only one set of footprints. I don't understand why you left my side when I needed you most." The Lord said: "My precious child, I never left you during your time of trial. Where you see only one set of footprints, I was carrying you.