You twisted it well in the end and not everybody can do that MrAnonymous, Its not true what you said about your poetry being terrible, we all have out own ways of expressing ourselves and yours is your style which is unique to you, Keep writing Rob
MrAnonymousOPBoise, Idaho USASep 26, 2009
All I do is just put some rhymes together with loose representations. Aside from this poem, I just re-word things with no real emotion behind it.
...And I wasn't fishing for a compliment..but thank you
ApostopheBoksburg, Gauteng South AfricaSep 26, 2009
Hi, But you do enjoy it otherwise you would not be here, so please keep writing, I do not post compliments unjustly, your poem had meaning to me and you did one of myy favourite things which is twisting the ending, I like that style, perhaps you might read my poem Journey and see thats what I like to do Enjoy your writing my friend Rob
MrAnonymousOPBoise, Idaho USASep 26, 2009
Kind of you to argue
I will give it a read.
fareawayhyderabad, Telangana IndiaSep 26, 2009
cant you see who he is????????????????????????????????????????? all my friend poets read carefully his words you will hear a bell ring in your memory then you will know who he is this person is!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its not true what you said about your poetry being terrible, we all have out own ways of expressing ourselves and yours is your style which is unique to you,
Keep writing
Rob
...And I wasn't fishing for a compliment..but thank you
The idea is just too large for my comprehension.
But you do enjoy it otherwise you would not be here, so please keep writing, I do not post compliments unjustly, your poem had meaning to me and you did one of myy favourite things which is twisting the ending, I like that style, perhaps you might read my poem Journey and see thats what I like to do
Enjoy your writing my friend
Rob
I will give it a read.
all my friend poets
read carefully his words
you will hear a bell ring
in your memory
then you will know who he is this person is!!!!!!!!!!!!