The scent of love

I made you want to say I love you
and all those things I chose to hear.
And nothing that I held above you,
could keep them all from within my ear

I'm sorry I made you say those things.
So sorry that you made me smile.
And to you I blamed the pain it brings
Please forgive me and let him defile

I apologize that I can't lie,
unless to say that I'm content.
I could never come to punch nor spy,
and for this fact I must lament.

I was never into hurt and rescue.
And never would I make you cower.
Tell me how else is there to reach you?
You better beat him to the shower
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2009

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Sunnn
bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
trurorob
You twisted it well in the end and not everybody can do that MrAnonymous,
Its not true what you said about your poetry being terrible, we all have out own ways of expressing ourselves and yours is your style which is unique to you,
Keep writing
Rob
MrAnonymous
All I do is just put some rhymes together with loose representations. Aside from this poem, I just re-word things with no real emotion behind it.

...And I wasn't fishing for a compliment..but thank you
Apostophe
No emotion behind the words?


The idea is just too large for my comprehension.


confused
trurorob
Hi,
But you do enjoy it otherwise you would not be here, so please keep writing, I do not post compliments unjustly, your poem had meaning to me and you did one of myy favourite things which is twisting the ending, I like that style, perhaps you might read my poem Journey and see thats what I like to do
Enjoy your writing my friend
Rob
MrAnonymous
Kind of you to argue cheers

I will give it a read.
fareaway
cant you see who he is?????????????????????????????????????????
all my friend poets
read carefully his words
you will hear a bell ring
in your memory
then you will know who he is this person is!!!!!!!!!!!!
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