Another cliche angel poem

Oh!
How lovely does that angel sing?

You know!?...
The one that has not flown?
...Whose hand will never sting.
She you've made your own?
To whom that you so cling?

(and now a jump roping cadence??)

She's left so quick, no time to spy
No proof will ever be an aliby

So cute, so precious, she's your flower
Let's feel secure, and make her cower.

Come to realize that you've fallen from grace.
Tell the whole world with the marks on her face

What is this? I think it's a clue.
She went to work again just to terrorize you!
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
Initially i wanted to keep the tension of the first six lines...but it didn't turn out like. Then, somehow it just kind of turned into a crowd of little girls skipping rope and doing that "patty cake chant" thing

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moonlove
that so beautiful and amazing poem...angel
Thanks for sharinggrin bouquet
MrAnonymous
confused
Apostophe
Clever lil poem!


yawn
gypsyheart
Your poems is quite intricate Anonymous- i like it though-shows a brilliant mindthumbs up bouquet
MrAnonymous
Thank you.....

And I've come up with name for this poem too. "In dependence"
MrAnonymous
...2 word. "In dependence". My last post didn't space out correctly
fareaway
This i think has a reference specifically may be thats why didnt get it.
thankyou for sharing
blessings
wave
fareaway
you dont frighten me
my Light protects me
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