Close your mind and open your eyes, let your mind take in just what you see.
the light falling in shivers of gold on the wood floor, the green green leaves shaking in the trees, the drops of rain racing down and dancing off the stones, the dog stopping to lap at the rain water and turning it to mud, the silver grey bird with yellow cheeks enjoying his bath of rain drops.
for a while it matters not that the person we crave has not seen us yet, the problems we face are making our shoulders heavy, the feelings of fading away and never being seen again are draining us.
we become part of the stardust that makes our world, we become the wind, the rain and the moonbeams. we are just cells that need to feel.
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
"It's not what you look at the matters, It's what you see" by Henry David Thoreau.
ladyjewel, I really like this poem...preconceived notions is what limits our experiential existences... Very Good Insight! Like your quote, as well. Robert
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMar 11, 2014
precious Odette, thank you sweet poet, lol the nectar of life . Mick, thank you so much. lovely Phyllis, thank you my friend. beautiful, hugs her. Robert, thank you xx
have found my soul craves you all when I am away to long xxx
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 11, 2014
You light up this Poetry Corner.
ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMar 11, 2014
grabs her hands and spins her round and round you are so good for my soul ok guys am changing, sory am now going for woman
Comments (10)
we become the wind, the rain and the moonbeams.
we are just cells that need to feel.
This is first class writing, so beautiful. I just read
Henry David Thoreau's Walden, I love his writings. Thank you Ladyjewel.
Delightful poem.....Mick.
I really like this poem...preconceived notions is
what limits our experiential existences...
Very Good Insight!
Like your quote, as well.
Robert
precious Odette, thank you
sweet poet, lol the nectar of life .
Mick, thank you so much.
lovely Phyllis, thank you my friend.
beautiful, hugs her.
Robert, thank you xx
have found my soul craves you all when I am away to long xxx
you are so good for my soul ok guys am changing, sory am now going for woman