reflection of my spirit splashed on the withered rose the scent lingers into my memory that flew among clusters of dust remember me, I know you will when the wind will sing my melody I will be there to wipe your tears as your heart beats inside of me your words will bring me back if only to feel you one last time So my love, when tomorrow comes celebrate with the breaking of the dawn in the depth of silence because when the sun rises, I will be there besides you, always.
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Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
I think that when we think of our last moments on this earth, we do strive to make everyone feels the beauty that life has given us.
After all is said and done..it is still a beautiful life..
Thank you so much Girly. I am subdued when i wrote this and I know it is a little depressing but the truth is that we do go and it is just a matter of time..
thanks..
Phyllis
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandApr 4, 2014
Yes my dear life holds no certainity,today here tomorrow not.All we can try to leave is fragrant memories and You sure have done this but remember nothing is over yet for yet another Dawn breaks and with it comes Hope,so keep going, sad thoughts assail us but we have to suppress them and go on.Lots of love.
My most respected friend of mine. Your countenance of hope never leaves me helpless. You always give me that push to gather all my strength and this I am forever pushed to the ground of assurance that in the end. all is great and fine.
silent_pawsLempster, New Hampshire USAApr 12, 2014
i really enjoyed this lj,i love this kind of deep and emotional poetry,to put out true feelings and turn them into words,only few can do,thanks for this write,and yes i'm a fan of this kind of poetry.
Comments (18)
thanks..
Phyllis
Ken
thank you always and your are the most kind..
filomena
Take care and how are you, too? Great I hope. Might be moving to Minnesota my friend. It was still snowing last week..
Take care.
phyllis
a wonderful coalescing of the earthen and ethereal
ty
Thanks
Take care..
lj
How are you my friend.
Phyllis