Sweating in night

cafetwo2010

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Jan 2012 556 Views 9 comments

Sweating in the night

Author: cafetwo2010

There was no poetry
for it..

cheap wine..

satin sheets..

a brass bed on
a roof top..

nothing but lies..

nothing but sweat,
grinding, and moans..

to hell with candlelight..

to hell with sweet nothings..

your legs clenched my half broken
back..

our hands clenched til our knuckles
were white..

like a black stallion I drove you
unmercifully into embattled screams..

you didn't care..

I didn't care..

no one was keeping score..

this was violent lust~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2012

About this poem:

Stolen waters are sweet..Proverbs.
Changed title under pressure of a CS maiden..lol

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Comments (9)

peaceful1

peaceful1missoula, Montana USAJan 3, 2012

Raw....

good strait up write ...so to speak but, I think you should have named it "Sweating in the Night"

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJan 3, 2012

Ok..for you dear..Sweating in the Night will be to your credit..

You have a hundred bucks left on your card..

peaceful1

peaceful1missoula, Montana USAJan 3, 2012

Too funny LOL

peaceful1

peaceful1missoula, Montana USAJan 3, 2012

You know I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me when I saw the title change....hehehe.

ReaderOfSouls

ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas USAJan 3, 2012

Pure, unadulterated passion!

Could be re-named "Passion's Clench".

marikia

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaJan 3, 2012

Very impressive, Cafe, I needed some time to get over it. I hope your half broken back doesn't hurt. Thanks for sharing!

LadyMorgana60

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 3, 2012

Lol..

Raw write indeed!

Oh! best work on your "Core"
Its pilates (a form of exercise to improve flexibility & performance)
It's good for your back..

Thanks for sharing..

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJan 3, 2012

Ty Odette** That could be dear, but I think it's classified information to be sumittted to the public after the smoke has cleared..

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJan 3, 2012

Maxeen ** I almost got my point accross on this one dear...

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