gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 2, 2009
I like this Blizza-you kept me in suspense till the last word.A story that works well in a poem-shorter read for the lazy one's that doesnt want to read a 200 page book.Well done
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USAOct 2, 2009
Thank you !! I'm glad it kept your attention !!
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 2, 2009
thankyou blizza, I have read this a few times now, after the first line, it always has me....it really is a compelling read......andrew.
I just write whats it my head at the time. There doesn't have to be a meaning to this...either you enjoyed it or you didn't. There's no deep philosophical meaning in there... but thank you for reading it =)
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You made my hair stand up straight ...
I'm glad it kept your attention !!
very thought provoking, but you ahd to read it all, sign of a godd poem
Rob
thank you
what's meaning pls?
can a poem be like this?
This is what I learned from here....only....
There doesn't have to be a meaning to this...either you enjoyed it or you didn't. There's no deep philosophical meaning in there...
but thank you for reading it =)