The Mystery of Susie ( Thriller Poem)

Where did little Susie go
Little Susie all alone
She left her school at three o clock
Never to come home

Her parents called the police
The police formed a search
And all the helpful volunteers
Gathered at the church

She had on a yellow sundress
Here's a picture of her face
At three o clock this afternoon
she vanished with no trace

Volunteers came from miles around
they searched with all there might
Soon the setting autumn sun
Just faded into night

Sometime around the midnight hour
A scream ripped through the trees
It made every hair stand straight up
And buckled both the knees

Out of the woods ran a volunteer
Her hands held to her chest
About a mile away she gasped
I found a yellow dress

The police found the yellow dress
So they began to search around
Close to thirty feet away
Little Susie laid face down

Naked as the day she was born
Her hands bound behind her back
Loosely laid around her head
Was a beat up burlap sack

Her throat had been sliced open
yet no blood was to be found
So someone had place Susie
right here on this frigid ground

The question still remains today
an answer we may never know
When the bell went off at three o clock
Where did Susie go ?
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (13)

ohio19
I love this poem I can relate thanks for sharing cheering teddybear
Sunnn
OMG

You made my hair stand up straight ...
gypsyheart
I like this Blizza-you kept me in suspense till the last word.A story that works well in a poem-shorter read for the lazy one's that doesnt want to read a 200 page book.Well donehug bouquet
Blizza801
Thank you !!
I'm glad it kept your attention !!
andrew149
thankyou blizza, I have read this a few times now, after the first line, it always has me....it really is a compelling read......andrew.
mrbignice
Well done man Well done
trurorob
Excellent Blizza801,
very thought provoking, but you ahd to read it all, sign of a godd poem
Rob
amahlala
I have to read this a few times...very thrilling...thank you!
Blizza801
Thank you all...I'm glad that you like it enough to read it over and over !!
thank you
Katfight
That was thrilling alright and even scary. Kept me rapt till the last word, well done.
waterfallriver
confused confused dunno

what's meaning pls?
can a poem be like this?confused
waterfallriver
"it made my hair stand up straight!"

This is what I learned from here....only....dunno grin
Blizza801
I just write whats it my head at the time.
There doesn't have to be a meaning to this...either you enjoyed it or you didn't. There's no deep philosophical meaning in there...
but thank you for reading it =)
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