Oh favorite liar my favorite mistake the worst choice I'd love to make You're all I think about when the sun goes down and the moon comes around whispering stories of our past Tales that never last Bitter sweet delusional self abuse the outrageous cost for thoughts of you and I am just a broke man a tattered, blue, and broken man In need of just a helping hand to get me through the night I conjour thoughts of anything to call your phone and let it ring then hang up before sound waves saddle words and ride them to the very ears that have dismissed my voice for all these years
Hi, Blizza801, the worst choice I'd love to make...then hang up before sound waves saddle words and ride them to the very ears. A scene with such powerful emotion!
Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 6, 2010
Touching,moving.. agree with goodguy, last 7 lines sums it all up. Good write Blizza. Ljj..
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAAug 6, 2010
it's the destructive ones that attach themselves to us the most...harder to shake off in the middle of the night. great poem, really, thanks for sharing.
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the worst choice I'd love to make...then hang up before sound waves saddle words and ride them to the very ears. A scene with such powerful emotion!
last 7 lines sums it all up.
Good write Blizza.
Ljj..
great poem, really, thanks for sharing.
lovely
Rob