Those Lovely Things

Where are the things you cling to tonight?
When candles birth shadows
to darken your skin
and your waiting for him
To call
To text
To come by and rest
his thoughts and worries on your smooth shoulders
that hold boulders of your own self doubt
So now what do you dream about?
Something sensual
something concentual
Maybe even just his breath on your lips
As he leans in close
tells you that its always been you both
and how lovely the candles extenuate
the hues of your garden green eyes
Where are the things you cling to tonight?
Clinging to wrong
when it hurts to be right
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Posted: Aug 2010

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Comments (7)

andrew149
Well written, good read, thanks Blizza.......Andrew.....cool
gnj4u
Hi, Blizza801,
Waiting...when it hurts to be right and candles birth shadows. Sad, nicely painted.
agoodguy2have
always hard to say, could go either way,
alas (a lass) she'll never know, the hurt won't let her go
Blizza801
Thank you....I'm glad that you enjoyed it
Ladybee42
you have a way of stirring up the real ingredients of life, thanks for sharing. thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
caroljoyce
Deep and thought provoking.
rebeccakelly78
you have such beauty with your words
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