talking back

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Mar 2012 597 Views 9 comments

talking back

Author: Unknown

oh my child please pick up your toys, why should i have to. oh my child its time for your bath, why me. oh my child its your turn to do the dishes,its not fare. oh my child what to do what to do. Your words of it's not fare,why me,I shouldent have to, drive me insane. oh my child why you demand with I wants,I need,I have to have. oh my child you have one large case of me idous. Ill do for you as much as I can with out complaint, but please my child show some restrant.

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Posted: Mar 2012

About this poem:

wrote this for my step daughter, she is all grown now and a blessing to behold.

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Comments (9)

adjhematteson, Illinois USAMar 13, 2012

Tells what we go through as parents. Always being tempted.

Great job.

mae988OPephrata, Washington USAMar 14, 2012

ty adjhe being a parent can have it challenges thats for sure.

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMar 14, 2012

I think it would be tough to be a parent with all the constant demands, good poem!

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAMar 14, 2012

"me-itous" An EXCELLENT term that I think deserves it's place in Webster's Dictionary!!
Isn't it something that unless that 'me-itious' is curbed at a very early age, it pretty much sets the pace of a person's life! Nice contribution!

mae988OPephrata, Washington USAMar 14, 2012

thank you all for your coments.

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAMar 16, 2012

Parenting is alot of work and commitment......it took me being a parent to truly understand what my parents, went thru, thanks that poem its so true!!!!

GracefulloneCambridge, Suffolk, England UKMar 16, 2012

This reminds me so much of the turbulent teenage years. I had 5! Nearly tore my hair out! haha.
Guidelines in parenting are a must, it gives that solid foundation with which to build on in Adult years.
Enjoyed your poem Mae, though for your lovely step-daughter, thanks for sharing.