when your're broken

waking up with a thunder
and lightning over your head
conscious yet slipping off
to the memories of your pain
all the dark storms
and mounting challenges
shape up again to your troubles
as if you hadn't had enough
and struggles just don't let up
you lost all your strength
and just want to give up
can't find reasons why tears
just don't stop falling
and you stop believing
there's any beauty left in living
you're broken
dead and hopeless
and still can't remember
why you're here in the first place
then
a tiny light shines
from where all the troubles began
and your dreams spring up
one more time
as you raise your head up
and look around
you're not alone
there are more souls
more broken than you are
so stand up
pull yourself together
there is beauty in the breaking
when you forgive
and give love a chance
one more time..

that is just the way it is.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
just a thought

thanks all for your read

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JEANIEMAC
Beautiful.
Expresses so well the hopelessness.
AND the return to optimism.
123whisper
Beautiful;and love return of optimisamwine Thank you for sharing dear friendteddybear Love youhug
morgen90210
its very forcefully and yet plainly thruthful too!!!
It is painfully beautiful. ....I feel this deep .....it stirred dead sea.....
darkhorse555
very beautifully drawn piece of writing phyliss loved the vision you paintangel wine
fjamesj9701
Thats my girl , good stuff your shining all the way here over your ECB head. Much loveā€¦Jessewine
Girlygirl196349
Beautiful and strong poem I can feel your words in my heart bouquet teddybear cheering angel ::wave:
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Now you remind me of my husband laugh He use to tell me when things were not so good to lets look around at all those that would love our life because theirs was worse than ours. Loved your poem. Thanks for the memory my friend. teddybear


Five years gone and I still call him my husband. I guess he always will be. dunno
loulou77
lind
Always a lovely read from you...hope things are well...wine
mcradloff
Forgiveness is a good way to forget the bad times that can happen to us. I asked a priest what heaven was and he said that heaven isn't a place, it is a person, God. I liked his vision, if we can be like God, then we can be heaven for others.teddybear angel2 happy place
lindsyjones
Jenie thanks so much for your comment. My first time to see you on my board and thank you so much..
lindsyjones
E tank you so much my friend...

How are you?
lindsyjones
Morgen thanks as usual..
lindsyjones
Liam my dearest brother thanks as always..
tigerkandil
good poem ,full of sensation
lindsyjones
Jesse my dearly loved WCB of mine..how is life treating you?

Thanks as always..

Mahal din kita..

Take care
lindsyjones
Girly, thanks as always my sister..

Take care.
lindsyjones
I am so glad I have reminded you of your "husband" and yes he should be Happy, for us Catholic, they never left, just in different state.

Take care.
lindsyjones
Lou my dearly loved friend of mine. Thanks always.,.
lindsyjones
Mac, your visit and comments are rare as I know you're not here always but they are a very potent source of inspiration. You always come up with relative connection to my writes and your comments and I truly appreciate..

Thanks always..
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