waking up with a thunder and lightning over your head conscious yet slipping off to the memories of your pain all the dark storms and mounting challenges shape up again to your troubles as if you hadn't had enough and struggles just don't let up you lost all your strength and just want to give up can't find reasons why tears just don't stop falling and you stop believing there's any beauty left in living you're broken dead and hopeless and still can't remember why you're here in the first place then a tiny light shines from where all the troubles began and your dreams spring up one more time as you raise your head up and look around you're not alone there are more souls more broken than you are so stand up pull yourself together there is beauty in the breaking when you forgive and give love a chance one more time..
Now you remind me of my husband He use to tell me when things were not so good to lets look around at all those that would love our life because theirs was worse than ours. Loved your poem. Thanks for the memory my friend.
Five years gone and I still call him my husband. I guess he always will be.
loulou77Vancouver, British Columbia CanadaJun 19, 2014
lind Always a lovely read from you...hope things are well...
Forgiveness is a good way to forget the bad times that can happen to us. I asked a priest what heaven was and he said that heaven isn't a place, it is a person, God. I liked his vision, if we can be like God, then we can be heaven for others.
Mac, your visit and comments are rare as I know you're not here always but they are a very potent source of inspiration. You always come up with relative connection to my writes and your comments and I truly appreciate..
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Expresses so well the hopelessness.
AND the return to optimism.
It is painfully beautiful. ....I feel this deep .....it stirred dead sea.....
Five years gone and I still call him my husband. I guess he always will be.
Always a lovely read from you...hope things are well...
How are you?
Thanks as always..
Mahal din kita..
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Thanks always..