From Me To You

edolly,Sydney, Australia


I needed to know what you felt for me,
So I could steer my own ...destiny,
Words from your lips you found hard to say,
Your peotry seemed... the only way,
You couldnt tell me what was in your heart,
Honesty I admired from the very start,
Are your boots filled with lead once again,
Or have you redeemed your lost freedom,

I travelled high and travelled low,
And wrecked my head ...on the go,
Sorry if I left you feeling deflated or flat,
I felt you gave up... and that is that,
You say I was single minded...sometimes its true,
But stubborness..pride was your downfall too,
We laughed about nice memories we'd make,
For that I am grateful...forever will keepsake,

Writing this down doesnt come easy to me,
Tis' you that has this gift ..you see,
Careful where you direct your pen next time,
Wouldnt want you to end up with a heart like mine,
Glad to have met you.. you have shown me alot..
Some good...some awesome...some not so hot......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2012

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trurorob
very nice read
Rob
Nuwahri61
Very well written an directed ..........touche .........cool grin
edolly
thanks for your comments :)
elo69
nice write....elo...wave
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