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There's a mist upon my sight
Clouds the daylight and the night
Like the passing of a life , without you;
Days are speeding moving on
Dreams are wishes built upon
And all i have is ever gone, without you;
And all i am i am
And all i be is me
Yet all i am i am for you
And this will always be;
There's a mist upon my sight
Clouds the daylight and the night
Like the passing of a life, without you..............
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
These are my Brother's words and their meanings are for the reader to decide. I feel their sadness!

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CloudySky
Very nicely written as I can feel the emotions so well in each word. Thanks for sharing with us.
velsix
Thank you for your comment CloudySky, I'm sure my Brother will be happy to know that someone liked it!!!!

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Ondos
"There's a mist upon my sight
Clouds the daylight and the night
Like the passing of a life , without you;"


THIS....IS...BEAUTIFUL!
velsix
Thank you Ondos, I thought so as well. My brother is 'gifted' but he won't admit to it, shame!!

cheers
gnj4u
Hi, velsix,
I share Ondos' sentiments on this one. Thanks for sharing.
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