Water Trees Wind Emptiness

by kilovoltsLudvika, Dalarna, Sweden

Aug 2012 622 Views 3 comments

Water, Trees, Wind, Emptiness

Now,
when you are the wind

I can breath you
wherever I am

Now,
when you are the trees

I can embrace you
wherever I walk

Now,
when you are the waters

I can let you surround me
whenever I dive

But now,
when you are everything

I feel more emptiness
than ever before

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Posted: Aug 2012

About this poem:

This is a (probably bad) translation by myself of a poem I wrote in my native tongue. I don't know if it even becomes anything near to a poem in English. But I post it anyway.

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Comments (3)

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 21, 2012

Having no idea how this would have been in your native language..all I can say as a person reading it for the first time..it reads very well!
Thank you for sharing Kilovolts

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaAug 21, 2012

I thought this was great...the dilemma between a nobody and a somebody so very well portrayed in here Kilovolts. Enjoyed reading it...if this is good...the original would have been better...my respect