Mountain creeks and lovely peaks

Clear and crisp the mountain air!
My Autumn Flower, come to me there!

Let's run with winds and kiss all night
Let's make sweet love in firelight

The woods are burning... Yellow! Red!
On fallen leaves we'll have our bed.

Our passion's wild like mountain creeks!
Our love soars high among the peaks!

Oh what is that, My Sweet Princess?
It's an alarm, what's the distress?

Your voice is weak, I cannot hear
with such a ringing in my ear!

Hey, creeks and mountains, they're all gone!
These are no leaves, I rest upon.

All by myself, I'm in my bed!
I had it only in my head!

That dream was real and very sweet
Now I feel lost and incomplete.

But from my bed, I have to rush.
I hear no creeks, just toilets flush.

And down the toilet goes my dream.
At breakfast faded had its theme.

All that awaits me is my day
so sad and lonely, dull and gray.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
This is my first poem written directly in English (except for the limericks). Please bear with me and all my grammatical mistakes. It's a bit silly and with some black humor.

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Comments (14)

LadyMorgana60
I have to admit to a little laugh here Kilovolts laugh I'm sure we all have had such dreams :)
I enjoyed your good humour and your written English is very good..
well done and thanks for sharing..enjoyed wine dancing
orientalkoru
I really love your gifts of laughter and good humor Kilovolts... and I enjoyed this one with much more laughter!rolling on the floor laughing yay
Chaptain
Nice flow! I only wish I didn't know that well what you're talking about ...
kilovolts
Thanks, you are very kind! Humor the only thing I have in my darkest hour as well as in my brightest day...
kilovolts
FunnyROMANTIX poem is a masterpiece and deserves 10 points. I bow in humble admiration after reading with smiles of recognition and can only blushing mumble a simple thank you for this eminent comment... cheering
Yankee4you
Kilo Very creative and well thought out conclusion and your translation into english and grammer is very admirable....thanks for sharing....beer
kilovolts
Well thanks for commenting, Yankee! I'm still a bit nervous to write in English, but get encouraged by your and all other nice comments. My teacher in English would have been proud laugh
Odette67
Our passion's wild like mountain creeks!
Our love soars high among the peaks!

This is a super poem...Since I don't have to go to work I can spend my days in the mountains letting my passions flow.purple heart
Ladybee42
Very nicely written kilovolts, wave
Your rhyming seems natural and works great.

thumbs up purple heart
kilovolts
thanks Odette and Ladybee, you are making me blushing here!
studecar
A very touching poem,it touches my inner feelings in that I have been in the same situation with a loss after many years of one near by. studecar
kilovolts
Redex, Studecar thanks
Tack, danke, kiitos, ???????!
I am blushing again.
kilovolts
Hm, seems like one cannot use cyrillic text in the comments. I tried to say thank you also in Russian but it went banana and turned into lots of ????????? instead crying
BBMis4me
So sad and lonely,
Maybe you were,
Straight to toilet,
Your dreams all went.

Life is not over,
Life does not end,
Your very sweet princess,
You will soon get.

Don't lose your hope,
You're going to see,
Burning with passion,
Your bed will be.

I liked your poem kilovolts. Please don't lose your hope. She will coming to you soon hug

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