Clear and crisp the mountain air! My Autumn Flower, come to me there!
Let's run with winds and kiss all night Let's make sweet love in firelight
The woods are burning... Yellow! Red! On fallen leaves we'll have our bed.
Our passion's wild like mountain creeks! Our love soars high among the peaks!
Oh what is that, My Sweet Princess? It's an alarm, what's the distress?
Your voice is weak, I cannot hear with such a ringing in my ear!
Hey, creeks and mountains, they're all gone! These are no leaves, I rest upon.
All by myself, I'm in my bed! I had it only in my head!
That dream was real and very sweet Now I feel lost and incomplete.
But from my bed, I have to rush. I hear no creeks, just toilets flush.
And down the toilet goes my dream. At breakfast faded had its theme.
All that awaits me is my day so sad and lonely, dull and gray.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
This is my first poem written directly in English (except for the limericks). Please bear with me and all my grammatical mistakes. It's a bit silly and with some black humor.
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 24, 2012
I have to admit to a little laugh here Kilovolts I'm sure we all have had such dreams :) I enjoyed your good humour and your written English is very good.. well done and thanks for sharing..enjoyed
I really love your gifts of laughter and good humor Kilovolts... and I enjoyed this one with much more laughter!
ChaptainDublin, IrelandAug 24, 2012
Nice flow! I only wish I didn't know that well what you're talking about ...
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenAug 25, 2012
Thanks, you are very kind! Humor the only thing I have in my darkest hour as well as in my brightest day...
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenSep 3, 2012
FunnyROMANTIX poem is a masterpiece and deserves 10 points. I bow in humble admiration after reading with smiles of recognition and can only mumble a simple thank you for this eminent comment...
Kilo Very creative and well thought out conclusion and your translation into english and grammer is very admirable....thanks for sharing....
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenSep 3, 2012
Well thanks for commenting, Yankee! I'm still a bit nervous to write in English, but get encouraged by your and all other nice comments. My teacher in English would have been proud
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 4, 2012
Our passion's wild like mountain creeks! Our love soars high among the peaks!
This is a super poem...Since I don't have to go to work I can spend my days in the mountains letting my passions flow.
Very nicely written kilovolts, Your rhyming seems natural and works great.
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenSep 4, 2012
Odette and Ladybee, you are making me here!
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USASep 4, 2012
A very touching poem,it touches my inner feelings in that I have been in the same situation with a loss after many years of one near by. studecar
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenSep 5, 2012
Redex, Studecar Tack, danke, kiitos, ???????! I am again.
kilovoltsOPLudvika, Dalarna SwedenSep 5, 2012
Hm, seems like one cannot use cyrillic text in the comments. I tried to say thank you also in Russian but it went and turned into lots of ????????? instead
BBMis4meHouston, Texas USASep 5, 2012
So sad and lonely, Maybe you were, Straight to toilet, Your dreams all went.
Life is not over, Life does not end, Your very sweet princess, You will soon get.
Don't lose your hope, You're going to see, Burning with passion, Your bed will be.
I liked your poem kilovolts. Please don't lose your hope. She will coming to you soon
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I enjoyed your good humour and your written English is very good..
well done and thanks for sharing..enjoyed
Our love soars high among the peaks!
This is a super poem...Since I don't have to go to work I can spend my days in the mountains letting my passions flow.
Your rhyming seems natural and works great.
Tack, danke, kiitos, ???????!
I am again.
Maybe you were,
Straight to toilet,
Your dreams all went.
Life is not over,
Life does not end,
Your very sweet princess,
You will soon get.
Don't lose your hope,
You're going to see,
Burning with passion,
Your bed will be.
I liked your poem kilovolts. Please don't lose your hope. She will coming to you soon
Kisses and Blessings