The cold world
Its a bitter, biting, blizzard that I have entered,
Lost and injured,
A wasp with no stinger,
A wounded animal surviving the winter,
Who's gonna remove this huge wooden splinter,
This stake that's been driven strait through my heart,
I'm undead, alive, alone in the dark,
I keep thinking back on memories,
Remembering how things used to be,
This sorrow seeps into my soul,
This game is so cold,
I feel centuries old,
With broken hearts and lost loves,
Is anyone right for any of us?,
Who do you trust?,
How do you endure?,
I see love as a sickness for which there's no cure...
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
rewrite...a little from the past and a little from the here and now...
Comments (8)
It can indeed be heaven and hell depending on who's involved I guess.
Great poem
I really liked your creation. I have not read your other poems but I'll do. I like your style no one of the word you used is in vain. The content is clear and real, because that is the world in which we live. I wonder how long ago you wrote this.
I'm new in this corner, just today I post my first one but I'm so happy to find so special and talented people like you.
I also think that love is a disease but if you've caught, don't worry. There is an antidote and although it is hard to get, this is really effective.
The love heal... with love
kisses and Blessings
Lorii