The Race!

The Race!

The glistened horses with snorting nostrils came out from the starting gate wildly, on their way!

They mustn’t crash or start to late!

They rushed out behind the steel meshed gate, some with legs pawing, crashing in the air!

For the winning money, the people couldn’t wait to win or loose their purse!

Oh! How the crowd did roar!

The people did shout with Glee!

Yelling so , let’s go, “Fancy Pants”, Let’s go, yelling so happily!

They wanted their special horse to win, for them to win their rewarding day!

The Horses rushed headlong in their special way,
Around the tract to cross the winning line!

Oh what an exciting and glorious day!

Magnificent muscular horses, stretching legs and necks!

On the way to make the people's day!

“Love’s choice“, makes her play, she’s leading the pack all the way!

“Fancy Pants” does his dance and he’s running third today!

Out in the stretch it’s “Hectors Son”, I think he’s won!

No! Out from the pack, way in the back it’s, “Mother’s Choice“, she’s the winners pick of the day!

And here they come, the race is done!

Number One, is “Mother’s Choice”!

“Hectors Son” is number two!

And “Love’s Choice” wins show, just for you!

“ Fancy Pants” hit the fence, out of the race,

Oh! Piety him what a disgrace!

I ripped his ticket right in two!

Hurray! Hurry!

Place your bets for the next horse race of the day!

Pick your winner!

A horse race is like life’s race

I wonder if we will win the race of such a hectic day,

Win first place, place or show?

Every one of us, is in the race of life whether it’s fast or slow!

Author

JimEee
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
We are all in the race of life, whether it be
the tortoise or the hare!

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morgen90210
Me place bet on hare to lose by a hair !!
marikia
I guess it is a race that counts more than an actual win. It is all the excitement that counts and surely we all won and lost in life - why worry, hearts broken are healed no matter how long it takes and a good loser is a winner in half cause there is hope that next time the race will be ours. I can't agree more, dear poet, with what you say about life being a race - against time first of all. cheering
mcradloff
I have a relative on my mom's side named Earlie Fires who has earned over 25 million in his career as a jockey. I have never bet on horses, but I have bet on greyhounds. Win, place, quinella, and trifecta are betting terms. The place is the easiest to win at, but barely covers your two dollar bet.dancing dog dancing dog dancing dog reindeer
JimEee
Captain Morgen Mee Bucko!

Hare today! Gone tomorrow!
What say ye friend ...

Blimey! Mee thinks that I will stay
and not light the last, Inch of Candle Yet!

Yur Matey!
JimEee
JimEee
Marikia

May the excitement of your race of
today and tomorrow fullfill your
hearts desires!

JimEee
JimEee
Mcradloff,

May your greyhounds never catch the rabbit,
so that you and they can dream of tomorrow's race!

JimEee
windyweatherly
Yes, Sir, we are all in this race called life.

Some are in the fast lane and most are in the slow and more are in the slower ones. I believe, that it is not the speed or how long it takes us to travel our specific destinations but how beautiful and meaningful we all go through every aspect of it. The adventure and effort we put out in all our experiences, be in pain, sorrows, glory, happiness and love is all that matters. Let us give our best for life is too short. Way too short at least this is how I feel. Well, twice I have been called and twice I dodged it and I guess this is what makes life feel so valuable.
Thanks for sharing such an evoking write.

WW


Every one of us, is in the race of life whether it’s fast or slow
teddybear gift cheers
Ladybee42
cheering <--- Yay for the winner, you always have to be on the look out for 'Fancy Pants' roll eyes Fun poem JimEee

laugh purple heart
JimEee
Ladybee42,

And it's ladybee out in front!
Fancy pants doesn't have a chance. Lol

JimEee
JimEee
Windyweatherly

The race of life, you understand and say
it so well!

JimEee
cafetwo2010
great story jimee..reminds me of one of old king Solomons proverbs..'The race is not to the swift
nor the battle to the strong..' thank you for this
story..
JimEee
Cafetwo2010

We are all in life's race together,
All in our own way!

Nice to hear from you!
JimEee
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