I like it when you ajust my tie before we go out to dinner.. When your soft hands pluck that little piece of lint from my sports jacket.. When your eyes tell me that you are for me.. I like that when our eyes lock from accross a crowded room your subtle smile can reassure me that my woman can heal any doubt's reflected in my green eyes.. You are beautiful.. The ballroom dance floor shimmered like colourful glass and I smiled as I watched you dance with other fellows.. But the band struck that familiar note.. It was our favorite slow dance song.. Everyone at the ball watched as you graciously set your wine glass on the candlelit table.. 'Who was she about to dance with was written on their faces as just the two of us met at the center of the dance floor?' The music began and your hands cupped the back of my head in adoration.. Your firm body pressed into me in a soulful melting.. There were whispers among the crowd.. They knew now that you were taken.. They knew they were witnessing an unbroken bond of unspeakable passion and devotion.. It could be argued that there were more beautiful women in attendance But none..more beautiful than you-
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 16, 2013
They knew now that you were taken.. They knew they were witnessing an unbroken bond of unspeakable passion and devotion.. -
You are just oozing with passion on this one my dear Jim. And, I might add, lucky indeed is she that seemed to have captivated your heart. My hats off to the both of you. Love is all there is.
Thanks for sharing.
Your friend,
Windy
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 16, 2013
Hi Cafe
Only one word comes to mind after reading your stunning poem.
MAGIC...
Thank you for your Wonderful thoughts
SkymoreRiga, LatviaFeb 16, 2013
Yes, there can be "more beautiful women in attendance , but none ... more beautiful than you " . When the right person is found , all the rest seem to be shadowed . Beautiful thought , beautifully presented ! Thank you for sharing ! Sky
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 16, 2013
Ty Windy..You maidens must appear before the castle tribunal and testify that you've been spiking my coffee with 'Love potion #9.' Thank's dear.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 16, 2013
Ty rapture..You maidens have pushed me to the edge..and I'm starting to like it.lol Perhaps I should raise the temperature..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 16, 2013
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 16, 2013
Ty Waterandthewild.. True love is forever ahead of its time..Thanks bro.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 16, 2013
Another fine write Cafe,well penned.If you keep this up you may have no more room to put all those maidens
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 17, 2013
a fine beautiful write indeed dear Cafe Had to adjust my specs! due to twitching nose!
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 17, 2013
Hi Cafe just read your poem again as I always do, and it was even sweeter the second time round... love your style and wit...thanks again for your Magic
Your fan from Ireland Martina
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 18, 2013
Ty rapture..Any maiden that reads a knights poem twice automatically recieves an extra case of lipstick produced in the Mystic Forest by the elves from the Lost Valley. It's the least I can do. Lol
Comments (12)
were taken..
They knew they were witnessing
an unbroken bond of unspeakable
passion and devotion..
-
You are just oozing with passion on this one my dear Jim. And, I might add, lucky indeed is she that seemed to have captivated your heart. My hats off to the both of you. Love is all there is.
Thanks for sharing.
Your friend,
Windy
Only one word comes to mind after reading your stunning poem.
MAGIC...
Thank you for your Wonderful thoughts
Beautiful thought , beautifully presented !
Thank you for sharing !
Sky
tribunal and testify that you've been spiking my coffee
with 'Love potion #9.' Thank's dear.
to the edge..and I'm starting to like it.lol
Perhaps I should raise the temperature..
And rare,
Good write cafe
Ru
its time..Thanks bro.
Had to adjust my specs! due to twitching nose!
Your fan from Ireland Martina
poem twice automatically recieves an
extra case of lipstick produced in the
Mystic Forest by the elves from the
Lost Valley. It's the least I can do. Lol