when I love

by lindsyjonesunknown, California, USA

May 2014 977 Views 20 comments

when I love

when I love
I give it all
my heart, body and soul

love whom that comes
for choices we've no count
but whom love
chose for us

I do love myself
loving you for all of me
and so I crave
to love you
with all that I have

now and for all ways
cause when I love
I give it all
my whole body, my mind
my heart and my soul.

Do you?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2014

About this poem:

Just love

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Comments (20)

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMay 31, 2014

The way love should be sister Phyllis..

Ken

lindsyjonesOPunknown, California USAMay 31, 2014

Thanks Ken my brother.

Yes, my weakness is that which fulfills me most.

To give all, eith my passion and life and anybody I love (d) would know.

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMay 31, 2014

I have to honestly say I don't give it all like you do. I was looking at your pictures and it looks like you were in first class on a plane. I guess if you give it all you get the rewards of having wine in first class instead of sitting in coach.

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 31, 2014

Dear friend lindsyjones;thank you for sharing this beautiful admiring thoughts that shows how brave heart you are;and that's what I sow in you from the start,most beautiful human being that leaves with full heart open,risking to get hurt and still never giving up on love.
I love you

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 31, 2014

hey mentor ...dear winterweatherly ...I miss you and this is so simple and yet so powerful ...we forget the magic behind it ...wonderful poem

online today!

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKMay 31, 2014

Hi Phyllis, I refuse to answer that question without my lawyer being present. Just kidding. I always Love with all. As always Phyllis your writes hold Interest. Myself I have many scars on my heart and I have caused some scars on hearts, but I still Love on completely. I always like reading your writes Phyllis. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 31, 2014

Such a beautiful poem!'