dying heart

i hand you a rose
one time red
turning black
darkness falls
drapes over
the light

as the strings
of this heart
play a lament
from deep
down inside

one soul cries
to the skies
a broken spirit
searching space

why me
it cries
what did i do
so wrong
in the beating
of my heart

each beat
a sword
tearing in pain
each string breaking

so deep a pain
burning this soul
the mind tormented
hell on a scale
love so cruel

each heartbeat
a pain
gasping
every breath burning
labored by
this ache

deep within
in my ocean
of tears
for you
did i
deserve this

tortured without sleep
walking in shadows
through eyes
of the dead
alone unloved
yet loved you
so deeply

afraid of love
as it hurts
a million miles away
this heart gone
cold dead
with love
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013
About this poem:
a painful reward

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doctorwho10
i enjoyed very goodhandshake
Odette67
afraid of love as it hurts,
a million miles away,
my heart gone cold ,
dead with love

This is a very passionate from the heart... deep poem. Liked muchly.thumbs up purple heart
darkhorse555
thank you for the comment drwhothumbs up cheers
darkhorse555
odette truly beautiful comment thank you ever so muchwine tip hat
paloma66
Soulful write darkhorse I feel your pain cause I too walked this valley,may God comfort you.heart wings thumbs up teddybear
darkhorse555
thank you palmola truely greatful for sch a beautiful commentcheers wine
trurorob
A nice poem but I would like to see you turn your pen to other poetic subjects as I think you may have a lot more to offer, just my view.
Rob
darkhorse555
rob you are so right i will come up with a mad one i promise thanks rob always enjoy your commentshandshake cheers tip hat
heidi3626
Wow...deep poem....love it lips xxx
darkhorse555
Heidi beautiful heartfelt georgous comment angel lips
wayne34
Awesome poem enjoyed
cheers
darkhorse555
thank you so kindly wayne dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel grin
Mizzy4
Extremely heartfelt write Liam,
One of your best......
Mick.

wine handshake
darkhorse555
mick thank you dear friend for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
joy truly a wonderful comment lovely vision thank you kindly smiling deeply appreciatedangel grin
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