summer rain

summer it was
when I was found

cold and tired
walking alone
in the rain

the warmth of your touch
made me strong
and made me stand again
on my own

I never thought
it would end. ..really
if I knew,
I would have said more
that would have stayed on my mind
as a reminiscence
of that summer rain

blah blah blah...
I remember you said more
blah blah blah

and. ..
only you and I would have known
what it meant. .

that lovely effect
of the wild summer rain. ..

in daintree, mooseman and cairns
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
Just wild thoughts of the past

Thanks all for your reads.

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Comments (14)

beautifulyou
"I never thought
it would end. ..really
if I knew,
I would have said more"


very moving phyllis,
thanks for the share of 'summer rain';
so poignant bouquet
reguiny2006
Phyllis, You have an unique way of expressing emotion, it's the difference that's importance.

Phil.
Happygolucky4u
I love walking in the rain. Thank you for sharing these moving feelings in your poem. I think most can think of a time when they wish they had said more.
"I never thought
it would end. ..really
if I knew,
I would have said more"

rose
trurorob
Sad but nicely done, hope your memories are now more bearable.
Rob
avias
Sounds wonderful...the summer rain and the warm touch.... to be shared and remembered...faithful memories.....happy place
trust63
good stuff linda nice descriptive emotion i like it handshake
lindsyjonesonline today!
Thank you as always my dear beautiful you for your kind comments.bouquet
lindsyjonesonline today!
My dear friend Phil, you too, comes are those wonderful verses that just make us so soothed in perusing them..

Thanks my friend.

Phylliswine
nonsmoker
Being from Ireland I can say enough with the summer rain. laugh

If only it were as inspiring as your words my friend bouquet hug
lindsyjonesonline today!
Rob, Jiy, and Harriet, I'm sorry for the late acknowledgement.

Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments.
lindsyjonesonline today!
Thanks trust and my dear friend M.
southmiami4321
Beautiful emotions expressed under the summer rain when inspirations calls for our writings.Enjoyed. SM
lindsyjonesonline today!
Non, I'm wondering when is a good month to come visit you.
lindsyjonesonline today!
SM, thank you for your comments. wave
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