Exmoor Stream (for fellsman)

I climbed to find your source
up the slippery slopes of shale
getting prickled by the gorse
I looked back over the dale

following your trickle down
as you widen and flow
far below I see a town
your waters now grow

the trickle now a stream
waters gush over the rocks
becoming now a scream
as you pass the gamecocks

ever widening as you go
dancing as down you bounce
a rabbit peeks out of its burrow
as you skip and flounce

onwards to the valley
there to join the river
slowing as you pass the abbey
where boats lay at anchor
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
rhyme does my head in lol

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Poetnumber1
Very nice poem Linda.gift purple heart
smmerwind
Just beautiful scenic walk

Thanks Linda
rapturecapture
Hi shadow
A lovely read as always..Beautifulhug wave
shadow1950
hey M.M dearest Poet ty but I still hate doing ryhme lol I did this for our traditional poet our dear Fellsman lol won't hurry to do anotherteddybear heart wings bartender drink pouring kiss
darkhorse555
nice rhyme i enjoyed thank for sharingsad flower cheers
Poetnumber1
I think you should try it again,with practice the rhythm and rhyme comes naturally. purple heart gift
shadow1950
Martina ty dear friend trust all is good with you
shadow1950
Phy ty dear friendteddybear
shadow1950
Hi Liam ty dear but I still don't enjoy doing rhyme lolteddybear
rapturecapture
Hi Shadow

Everything is good here, Thank God
Looking forward to Patrick's Day
I join a folk band for 2 gigs on Sunday.
so I am looking forward to that.

hug wave heart wings
shadow1950
that sounds like good fun I remember going to an irish dance in Bantry bay way back in 65 trying to do the reels lol was great funteddybear
shadow1950
hmmm Dear M.M try again well I did what did I get ? a headache lol will leave to you trad poets and save what little scrabbled brains I still haveteddybear bouquet hug kiss
Fellsman
Hi Shadow

Your head may well be 'done in' writing in rhyme, but there is certainly some fine rhyme in this poem. You describe some delightful rural scenery in this peaceful meander - making Exmoor sound so attractive. Thanks for the dedication in the title, it's great to hear of the joys of rural England so elegantly expressed expressed at the opposite end of the country to where I live.

Kindest regards

Bill teddybear gift
shadow1950
Hi Bill tnx for reading yes Exmoor is beautiful and vastly different depending which part you are in but then again so is the lake district we are so lucky to have such a vast range of different landscapes in this island of ours glad you enjoyed itteddybear bouquet hug kiss
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