Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 13, 2013
I think you should try it again,with practice the rhythm and rhyme comes naturally.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 13, 2013
Martina ty dear friend trust all is good with you
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 13, 2013
Phy ty dear friend
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 13, 2013
Hi Liam ty dear but I still don't enjoy doing rhyme lol
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMar 13, 2013
Hi Shadow
Everything is good here, Thank God Looking forward to Patrick's Day I join a folk band for 2 gigs on Sunday. so I am looking forward to that.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 13, 2013
that sounds like good fun I remember going to an irish dance in Bantry bay way back in 65 trying to do the reels lol was great fun
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 14, 2013
hmmm Dear M.M try again well I did what did I get ? a headache lol will leave to you trad poets and save what little scrabbled brains I still have
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 31, 2013
Hi Shadow
Your head may well be 'done in' writing in rhyme, but there is certainly some fine rhyme in this poem. You describe some delightful rural scenery in this peaceful meander - making Exmoor sound so attractive. Thanks for the dedication in the title, it's great to hear of the joys of rural England so elegantly expressed expressed at the opposite end of the country to where I live.
Kindest regards
Bill
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 31, 2013
Hi Bill tnx for reading yes Exmoor is beautiful and vastly different depending which part you are in but then again so is the lake district we are so lucky to have such a vast range of different landscapes in this island of ours glad you enjoyed it
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Thanks Linda
A lovely read as always..Beautiful
Everything is good here, Thank God
Looking forward to Patrick's Day
I join a folk band for 2 gigs on Sunday.
so I am looking forward to that.
Your head may well be 'done in' writing in rhyme, but there is certainly some fine rhyme in this poem. You describe some delightful rural scenery in this peaceful meander - making Exmoor sound so attractive. Thanks for the dedication in the title, it's great to hear of the joys of rural England so elegantly expressed expressed at the opposite end of the country to where I live.
Kindest regards
Bill