Endless rain

I'm down to my last,
I'm fading fast,
All theses memories flash,
Showing me scenes from my past,
I try to relax,
But I keep getting wet,
In this endless rain,
It falls down on me,
Feeling so drained,
From the constant strain,
You help the pain,
You make it all go away,
Please stay,
You make the pain go...away
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
A short melody I remembered
from one of my lost books...
wrote this probably 10 yrs ago,
She didn't stay...

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shadow1950
Tony i love this its humourous yet serious
a fine write
I try to relax,
But I keep getting wet,
In this endless rain,
says it all
teddybear bouquet hug
madtat29
Ty Shadow...drinking
beautifulyou
Mad, this write, as with so many of yours,
is filled with deep humanity,,,
so beautifully poignant

bouquet
smmerwind
This is sad Tony and I'm glad it's in the past.

Thanks for sharing
mcradloff
I was thinking ten years ago I was working at a bakery/deli washing pans and looking forward to getting off work in an hour. We are entering the season of rain. We did get snow yesterday, but it was so light that a whole day of it didn't even get an inch.smitten bunny
Poetnumber1
Melancholic but its a good write bro.All the best!
trurorob
I enjoyed this Madtat.
Rob
gnj4u
Hi, madtat29,
Very moving. The rains may still come; but, having someone with whom to share it does help make the pain go...away.
madtat29
Ty beautiful... your comments are always so nicewave
madtat29
Hello Phyllis ...if you look at it everything is in the past...and how we view it shapes the future...glad to see you...wave
madtat29
Right on Mc...I've been in construction my whole life...ten years ago I was plumbing..man how time flies eh bro?cheers
madtat29
Thanks for reading poet 1...Best wishes palcheers
madtat29
Good to see you rob...thanks for reading...cheers
madtat29
Gnj4u...Ty for your moving and thoughtful insights...wine
fjamesj9701
I could find myself in a cascading effect of calamity, memories of past regrets or what have you. The end result the effect was to feel this endless rain, and there was one that made it all go away for me too, but she didnt stay either. I really dig your writings , i can relate and enjoy reading. Good stuff MT.....Jessecheers
Ladybee42
Perhaps the most inspiring love is the love that leaves before you are tired of it? Then this would mean that all the best love songs and poems are written by the broken-hearted. conversing

typing

Very cool words sir

purple heart purple heart
rapturecapture
Hi madtat

Memories of lost love..
Enjoyed reading Endless rain.wave
madtat29
Right on Jessecool Glad ya dig itcheers
madtat29
That's seems about the truth of it Bee ..I write the best stuff from heartache.
I think that's why like country music sometimes..I feel it..
thought provoking comment..Thanks for readingwine
madtat29
Ty rapture!wine
darkhorse555
far away a distant memory brought to life nicely done i enjoyedcheers handshake
cherryreggae
Hi tat....can relate to these buried feelings that resurface again, in different periods of life somex a song or conversation has the mind,, triggered off & reflecting on those times,,, I guess its just a cycle that we are meant to be apart of. Even though we may not understand why It could be maturity ,time, growth. Or experiences...thanks4 sharingthumbs up conversing bouquet
madtat29
Hiya cherry..Ty for the thoughtful reflections...wine
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