Whisper of a lovers touch

by ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal, South Africa

Apr 2013 486 Views 8 comments

Whisper of a lovers touch

She stands on the mountain top as far as she can go
Over the edge there is nothing
The quiet closes her in a blanket
The wind lifts her hair and strokes its fingers over her face
Like a lovers touch,
She closes her eyes and lifts her hands to him.
He slips around her body and wraps his breath around her soul
She stands and lets him love her for hours
Smiles and opens her eyes
Sighs
And walks slowly back to the world where she has to be strong again.

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Posted: Apr 2013

About this poem:

Dreams

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Comments (8)

studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAApr 6, 2013

ladyjewel, quite descriptive, interesting and very novel, I enjoyed. studecar

ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaApr 6, 2013

Thank you kind Sir :-)

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAApr 6, 2013

She stands and lets him love her for hours
Smiles and opens her eyes
Sighs
And walks slowly back to the world where she has to be strong again

lady Jewel, it is like she is so vulneragble to be hurt again but yet gain strength as she is back to reality?

Deep and thought provoking my dear.

smmerwind

ladyjewelOPDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaApr 6, 2013

Thank you:-)
Yes its sometimes the inner peace that helps us cope and dreams, i love dreaming xx