love now drifts heaven bound somewhere up there in the ether one day soon to be re-found til then the stars shine brighter their glow lit by your heart showing me the way to you I rejoice as when I depart the path comes into view back-lit all the way by stars moonbeams guide me music plays from sitars drifting down in time with my heartbeats gently I float upwards never again to be apart sip wine in heaven's vineyards
love now drifts heaven bound somewhere up there in the ether one day soon to be re-found til then the stars shine brighter their glow lit by your heart showing me the way to you
This is just too sad Shadow... Though well penned.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 8, 2013
hi Liam ty dear glad you liked it
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 8, 2013
Hi Chrissie ty yes I was deeply in reflections when I wrote it think of it not as sad but as freedom that will come to us all one day ty for reading
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 8, 2013
Dear Shadow, here is a big HUG just for you... You are a star.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 8, 2013
aww Chrissie ty dear lady
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandApr 8, 2013
Hi Shadow
sip wine in heaven's vineyards
I just love that line
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 8, 2013
hi Martina maybe just maybe getting the hang of this wretched rhyme stuff lol the sonnet seems to have helped ty dear lady
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 8, 2013
Your poem flows quite nicely Linda.
sip wine in heaven's vineyards
Beautiful!
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 8, 2013
ty dear M.M you are right about practice glad you enjoyed it ty for reading
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somewhere up there in the ether
one day soon to be re-found
til then the stars shine brighter
their glow lit by your heart
showing me the way to you
This is just too sad Shadow... Though well penned.
sip wine in heaven's vineyards
I just love that line
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts
sip wine in heaven's vineyards
Beautiful!
Bill