Celestial Dance

The sun and the moon bowed to each other
as they pass on their orbital routes
the stars did a heavenly dance of honour
the planets glistened bathed in deep purple

Mercury orbiting closest to the sun
fastest of all of the planets are you
Venus (twinned with Earth) the planet of love
lighten our hearts with your femininity

Earth our own planet only known source of life
Mars the red planet and bringer of war
Jupiter you are the jewel in the crown
we gaze at you breathless with wonder and awe

Uranus once known as Georgium Sidus
you are the enchanting ringed planet of beauty
Saturn, he languidly goes his own way
quietly, quietly just doing his duty

Neptune almost last but not least of the planets
you tip your trident, saluting the Sun
as all of our planets delight in celestial dancing
we watch hearts struck as they do their run



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Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
Pluto has recently been 'downgraded' to be a dwarf planet - and is thus not now usually included when listing the planets

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purplemist2012
excellent, applause
shadow1950
ty purplemist glad you enjoyed ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug
Poetnumber1
Somebody has been doing a bit of rhyming,have we herelaughDescriptive imagery my dear friend.Lovely poem! bouquet teddybear hug
fjamesj9701
Lovely, informing, Great work Shadow. You shine with those planets in your own celestial dance.Thank you for your beauty...Jessewine
paloma66
Great write shadowenjoyed your Celestial Dance,thank you.

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shadow1950
hi M.M ty for comments glad you enjoyed yes photo is beautiful the continent is Africa ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug purple heart kiss wine angel
shadow1950
ty Jesse nice comments dear friend teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
ty Paloma glad you enjoyed it you 2 have written some great poems recentlyteddybear bouquet hug wine
darkhorse555
i jumped over the moon nice write you gone universalthumbs up handshake
shadow1950
the heavens play such an important part in our lives I thought I would do a penteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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