just what i feel

canthelpbinshi

by canthelpbinshiplainville,ct, Connecticut, USA

Apr 2013 295 Views 5 comments

just what i feel

Author: canthelpbinshi

Love is like the sun,
The true beauty shines from the heart and radaites through to the out siside for all to see, "those that can see true beauty"
Before Flowers bloom ,the true beauty begins,it starts small and pretty then blossoms into the most wonderful thing god alows use to see.....sorry if this dosent ryhm, just needed to expressand let alittle love building up inside!betteer may come or may not I just have a pssion to express, can't help it

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Posted: Apr 2013

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Comments (5)

fjamesj9701

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 21, 2013

Good use of expression and analogy... Jesse

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKApr 21, 2013

rhyme is not the be all or end all its what's written and this is written from the heart good pen

canthelpbinshi

canthelpbinshiOPplainville,ct, Connecticut USAApr 21, 2013

Thankyou all of you for your comments they are heart felt! Very much appreciated!!!

jonE2tone

jonE2toneOrlando, Florida USAApr 21, 2013

Not everything needs a rhyme just a direction and this is well pointed in the right one

ladyjewel

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaApr 22, 2013

nice to write from the heart:-)

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