cross from the darkside release me from these chains my saviour i found you open the lock with your magical key on leaving the lock the key a beautiful butterfly flying to you love swallowed by the frog who hopped into the pond sitting on a lilly leaf eyes closed dreaming my key it found you deep down in your throat searching for your heart have i found you only then i give you my soul you found my heart
Good write my friend!! I once saw a giant bullfrog leap out of the water and eat a hovering bird!! I would never have believed it f I hadn't seen it with my bare eyes!! The metaphorical key is always interesting to use and you have used its symbolism very, very well here.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 3, 2013
Now this one is deep,very well written.Good stuff!
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Nice poetry.
Open the lock.::
only then i give you
my soul
you found my heart
This poem is exquisite Liam.