lost love

come all you knights and maidens
a gathering for you in the jungles of life
travelling to the centre of our world
to you all i hail
take me to this other land
showing me magic spells
like the warlock of old
you give me portions of love
in the land of milk and honey
dreams become reality
with all the emotions
a man or a woman possess
vanishing in the bermuda triangle
the triangle of emotions
like mosses the sea parts
paradise lost hidden in the storm
tossing me every which way
spiralling around in circles
in whirpool of air my breath laboured
crushing like the great boa
to breathe no more
pain and suffering pass us by
all of a sudden i am there
a mystical land beautiful flowers everwhere
smells of paradise
flowers of many colours everywhere
a wonder to the beholder
beauty as far as the eyes can see
bards with magical words
turns a desert to paradise
the land of giants
amongst giants who raise me up
with magic words you walk on water
waterfalls fountains of forever young
the departed never age
youth forever love
standing tall i am in paradise
in my hand a quill
we stand giants blown away each breath
we speak of dreams of love
happiness in a fairytale ending
stories of pain and suffering
of good fortune and woe
dreamers a circle of poets
with a pen they take you to the door
come dine with me at this table
we are knights and maidens
lost in this magical realm
created from love
emotions from our hearts
hate the burning emotion of love
in the sunset of our mind paradise
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Posted: May 2013

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ladyjewel
A magical, mystical, walk into a land of dreams and true wonderhug
My kind of walkkiss
nonsmoker
Aye To The great hall we go cheers
Odette67
dreamers a circle of poets
with a pen they take you to the door
come dine with me at this table
we are knights and maidens
lost in this magical realm
created from love
emotions from our hearts

So much to ponder on, in this lovely poem Liam. hug purple heart
Poetnumber1
Nicely done Liam,theres alot of interesting phrases portrayed in this one.
Jyonnah
Yoohoo, knights & maidens! Wait for meeee! I wanna go to that mind paradise, too!! joy danceline angel2
darkhorse555
ladyjewel thank you ever so much a walk with a differencethumbs up tip hat
Fellsman
Hi liam

This is like an amalgam of Utopia and Alice in Wonderland, - and a rattling good write.

Best wishes

Bill cheers
darkhorse555
ladyjewel thank you so muchthumbs up tip hat
rapturecapture
Hi Darkhorse

Mmmmmmm... Wonderful, magical, beautiful, fantastic,amazing,stunning,write.wow
Thank you for sharingapplause hug angel wave
darkhorse555
nonsmoker dont forget the duck has his eye on you great comment thank you so muchthumbs up cheers grin
shadow1950
hi Liam this is a seriously excellent write you take us on your journey I love it expertly penned teddybear bouquet gift hug kiss wine tip hat bowing
wayne34
Very creative write dh enjoyed this poem into the land of giant s stand tall my friend enjoyable writehandshake professor
darkhorse555
odette a mystery tour of something beautiful lovely comment thank you so muchthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
bill a rattling comment down the yellow brick road of life thank you for your wonderful comment thumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
rapture such an amazing comment i am left without words you said them all thank you so much thumbs up tip hat thanks
steve1223
A great tale indeed

beer
fjamesj9701
Good stuff my friend, I enjoyed. I hope your having duck for a feast...Jessegrin
darkhorse555
linda a little something created from love like your comment beautifulthumbs up tip hat
timotie
darkhorse5555.
The poem is like streched Pearls.

Very Nice for sharing
This poem with Us.thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up

'lost love,bouquet
darkhorse555
wayne a wonderful comment and thank you so much thumbs up cheers grin
darkhorse555
steve the tale of lifes lovely comment thank youthumbs up wine
darkhorse555
jesse the duck is afraid of you feast ha ha lovely comment thank palthumbs up wine grin
darkhorse555
timiote a diamond of a comment thank you ever so muchthumbs up wine
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