out of the clouds

like a fleeting white dove
our paths crossed
in the tingling running down my spine
in beautiful words
only in the blink of an eye
i saw such beauty
like a beautiful sculpture
surrounded in a boquet of flowers
my eyes are drawn
i all but kiss your feet
paying homage to your beauty
your heart takes my breath away
in my universal being
my soul cries to you in the mist
like a grand opening
in my theatre of life
my barriers fall
the skeleton opens
beating unwrapped
i hand you it all
on a silver platter in the mist
i give you my heart
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2013

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fjamesj9701
Good stuff Mr LDH you are the manpointing
Barbarossa
This would make any lady suitably impressed.
Bravo.....
Respectfully R.
Bajanshay
in my universal being
my soul cries to you in the mist


Beautifully done! gift
Spartacus2012
descending out of the clouds, nicely penned...kencheers
darkhorse555
jesse with so much pleasure thank you so much a lovely commentthumbs up wine tip hat
pazamorylibertad
Wow! You should publish your poems! You are definitely have "a way with words"! So talented!
bard76
beautifully written, you got to be my favourite poet on here, fellow celt......david.....
Odette67
on a silver platter in the mist
i give you my heart

"AWESOME" DH. hug purple heart
darkhorse555
barbossa truely amazing comment with so much gratidute thanks if only i dream angel
darkhorse555
bajanjay wonderful comment thank you ever so muchthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
Spartacus lovely comment a few clouds overhead smoke signals saying thank you so muchthumbs up wine
darkhorse555
pazmora suberb comment left me stump for words amazing comment thank you ever so muchthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
david your words so endearing thank you so muchangel
darkhorse555
Odette your comment just blew me away thank you so muchthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
niah with pleasure thank you so much a beautiful comment thumbs up tip hat
heidi3626
Thank you for your heart babe I will take extra special care of it lips teddybear xxx
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