by Unknown
Jun 2009 526 Views 7 comments
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Comments (7)
I agree with what you say but others may not, that's why you get little feedback.
Perhaps a little more objectivity might lift it. More of your sorrowful feelings and less agression will make it shine.
Still I like it and I admire the strength of your convictions. Keep it up.
Have you seem the film "Zeitgeist" on their website...from what you write you might find it interesting...but read what the critics have to say, too.