I feel like Pinnochio, Only a toy, Hoping, just wishing, I was a real boy, All of me made of pieces, parts, A walking talking work of art, Screws, dowels, wooden pins, Everything that's holding me in, Pulling strings, I dance and jig, While the Puppet Master, Laughs and grins...
`This was such a good write. Very descriptive. I feel disappointed every time I hear someone lie and their pants don't catch on fire.
BBMis4meHouston, Texas USAJul 4, 2013
Pinocchio was a puppet, which was made from pieces of wood and as you say, he was a toy, but one very special toy, because he had heart. That's why he dreams of becoming a real boy.
His pain and insecurities made him lie and he felt so much pain because others laughing about him and he could not change his sad reality, but something happened, and someone heard his voice and his wishes, and the miracle happened right there :) because... He became a real boy.
The same happen to many of us, and some one will heard our voice, our wishes from the bottom of our hearts.
Hey young man...what an impressive write...I second Stella's take...Pinnochio was special...he had a heart that made him more than just who he thought he was and how other's saw him...very much like I see you.
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Nice poem Madtat
you got your own style
one day that puppet master
gonna know that !
His pain and insecurities made him lie and he felt so much pain because others laughing about him and he could not change his sad reality, but something happened, and someone heard his voice and his wishes, and the miracle happened right there :) because... He became a real boy.
The same happen to many of us, and some one will heard our voice, our wishes from the bottom of our hearts.
I liked your poem very much.
Hugs, kisses and blessings for you Toni.
Stell
in the best sense of the word
Ty for the candid nature of your sharing