Dont you lie...

I feel like Pinnochio,
Only a toy,
Hoping, just wishing,
I was a real boy,
All of me made of pieces, parts,
A walking talking work of art,
Screws, dowels, wooden pins,
Everything that's holding me in,
Pulling strings,
I dance and jig,
While the Puppet Master,
Laughs and grins...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
Feeling jerked around lately...

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Comments (22)

Ladybee42
Is puppet master a male or female? dunno cut the strings I'd say, but then that's easier said than done eh?
Nice poem Madtat

purple heart purple heart
shadow1950
ahh Tony I love your mind another master pieceteddybear bouquet gift hug kiss cool wine
morgen90210
snap back!
you got your own style
one day that puppet master
gonna know that !
frustrated
madtat29
Nothing is ever as easy as it's supposed to be it seems...Ty Lady Beewine
madtat29
Glad you enjoyed Rapture ...Ty for reading wine
madtat29
Ty much Lady Shadow.. wine
Happygolucky4u
`This was such a good write. Very descriptive. I feel disappointed every time I hear someone lie and their pants don't catch on fire.
sigh
BBMis4me
Pinocchio was a puppet, which was made from pieces of wood and as you say, he was a toy, but one very special toy, because he had heart. That's why he dreams of becoming a real boy.

His pain and insecurities made him lie and he felt so much pain because others laughing about him and he could not change his sad reality, but something happened, and someone heard his voice and his wishes, and the miracle happened right there :) because... He became a real boy.

The same happen to many of us, and some one will heard our voice, our wishes from the bottom of our hearts.

I liked your poem very much.

Hugs, kisses and blessings for you Toni.

Stellangel teddybear heart wings
madtat29
Hey thanks Morgen...cheers
madtat29
Appreciate the comment there Bill...cheers
madtat29
Lol happy...there'd be a lot of people running around with smoking shorts...grin
madtat29
Ty Stell ..you thought about it a little deeper than even I did...Ty for readinghugbouquet
fjamesj9701
I feel the sentiments here Mr MT. Good write my friendbeer
madtat29
Thanks Jesse good to hear from you bro...cheers
darkhorse555
my god is that how you feel hold on a minute you need to stay out of the sun it might fade your colour lovely piece i enjoyed pinnochiothumbs up wow rolling on the floor laughing
madtat29
Thanks DH glad ya liked it bro ...ill put on some sunscreen...err wood polish cheers
beautifulyou
Mad, among many things you are 'A walking talking work of art,'
in the best sense of the word

Ty for the candid nature of your sharing kiss
orientalkoru
Hey young man...what an impressive write...I second Stella's take...Pinnochio was special...he had a heart that made him more than just who he thought he was and how other's saw him...very much like I see you. wine thumbs up
madtat29
Aww shucks Beautiful...get a guy to blushin blushing Ty for reading
madtat29
Thanks for the kind comments Oriental wine
lucylge
thumbs up
madtat29
Hiya Lucy...Ty for reading
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