voice of merman

Merman roars from the top of his lung's,
to the thundering dark clouds
Across his sky,
in severe whistling,
my head bows in your shame

In the tune of change
As my ocean swells,
you begin to rip
the insides out of me

A mermaid from hell
Eyes left me in the dark,
snarling white fangs'
shark like
barricade of emptiness

Ugly words bite
Deep into the pain,
each lash of the tongue
Like you savour in pleasure
Mouth ripping deep

Distorted ugly lies
As the poison drips
Out of the foul mouth
Becoming a vile beast

Hell with you
The heart withers,
dying one time beauty
Cracks in the ache,
wounded severely

Light, I look to you
Loves holy name speaks,
one time my little mermaid
To the wicked ways
You escaped hell,

one of your creations
Love in me disappeared,
wishing on me
The torment,
my heart for you
Died
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2013

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ladyjewel
crying this one is sad and made my heart ache, teddybear ,
hugs him tighthug
Fellsman
Hi Liam

You convey the agonies of blighted affection with stunning use of metaphor... A cathartic write.

Best wishes

Bill cheers
shadow1950
dark and deep emotions here excellent Liam teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
madtat29
Stunning visuals! Great write bro!handshake
weemick1960
Hi Liam,
Excellent again my friend. Okay, I got to move to Ireland, it has to be something in the air. It has to be. You come out with these pieces one after the other. Well done partner.
Catch you later Liam,
See you on the flipside my friend my friend.
MIKE.
darkhorse555
ladyjewel thank you kindly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciatedthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
bill thank you for the stunning beautiful comment deeply appreciated angel grin
darkhorse555
linda thank you for the most beautiful comment deeply appreciatedthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
madtat thank you dearly for the lovely comment deeply appreciatedthumbs up grin
darkhorse555
mick thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel
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