The Vista of Death

The vista of death hovers ever near
the woman's face awash with tears
as his last words she leans over to hear
the pain of his passing through her sears

Lost in her pain nothing else registers
life slowly passes on by as she grieves
emotions in deep freeze nothing stirs
from this there will not be any reprieves

This pass should never have been
a child never should be laid first
she shivers, moans touching skin
as into the coffin he goes feet first

The bullet has ended a young soul
so senseless and wasteful a death
has left her totally without console
full of heart ache and shortened breath

Her family try whilst also grief struck
to help ease her pain and her suffering
as to the grave she walks now unstuck
with life she is done, its all far too tiring
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Posted: Aug 2013

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kidmenot
very touching it made me mornfull of the poor soul.
shadow1950
hi Cameal yes sad but that's today's world our children more often go first ty teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
gnj4u
Hi, shadow1950,
One could not help but be seared by such pain as that captured in The Vista of Death. Yes, there is little that could help ease her pain and her suffering except the numbness that time allows and the love and support of those that remain, sharing in grief. Thanks for sharing.
shadow1950
hi Joy as we age we know such pain tyteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
bungallow55
Sad poem.heart wings
Spartacus2012
Heartfelt write mi Linda....Ken...comfort
darkhorse555
linda a beautiful piece played on the heart string god blessangel
Poetnumber1
Oh so sad my friend.But this was a delightful piece to peruse.Glad I stopped by today.
shadow1950
ty Ken it was only when I reread I realised how sad ty teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Liam glad you enjoyed dear teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
Ty dear M.M life is often sad parents should not out live their children
teddybear bouquet hug kiss purple heart wine angel
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