Dear Doctor

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Aug 2013 417 Views 5 comments

Dear Doctor

Author: Spartacus2012

Doctor,
My sky is absent moon
the day
circumvents me
night owls mock me
the crickets song is sad...

Sometime I am in
a crowded room
but feel alone
a lonely car
on a lonely street...

Doctor,
my heart sheds a silent tear
I am in remorse
it is filled with love
my bed is warm
but my soul is without a mate...

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Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (5)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 23, 2013

very beautiful piece of writting ken in the absent moon

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 23, 2013

Sometime I am in
a crowded room
but feel alone
a lonely car
on a lonely street...

I think everyone feels like this sometimes,

I know it will not be for long

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 23, 2013

Hey Liam,

thanks for visiting and the beautiful comment...

Your friend,

Ken..

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 23, 2013

Hi Ken,
Here's another one who knows where you're coming from. Not truly understanding people, i am always alone in a crowded room. A world teeming with life and yet it can be such a lonely place. If i weren't me i'd start feeling sad now. No, i do feel a little sad. That means it was a good read Ken.
Catch you later,
Your friend,
MIKE.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 23, 2013

Hey Mike,

I think all of us feels alone sometimes...This was a passing feeling..I have a attractive lady who loves me...Just we romantics miss our ladies when they are not around...I suppose most poets are introverts, like us..Thanks for visiting bro..

Your friend,

Ken..