Raining Razorblades

oh hear we go again with another one of my sob stories
how i got my heart murdered and was left gory
but it's all my fault, i put myself in these situations
always trusting, loving, thinking I've found the equation
then the sun hides behind a cloud as the storm comes
believing every word she said, boy was i dumb
i feel numb, i think my heart has had a stroke
and suddenly i can't breathe as your words start to choke
every last hope i had of you being there for me
and now it's raining razorblades, but i was prepared to bleed
it's not like I've never been hurt before, you'd think I'm addicted to pain
and if so, I'll weather the storm, let it rain, let it rain
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Posted: Sep 2011

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RedHeadedTaurus
Kinda painful read, but incredible flow.


comfort
agoodguy2have
dement, you i think, get it....let it rain, we'll be writin'. ;-)
Dementia
Thanks for your comments Red. painful indeed. and thanks for the comment
leigh2154
Just jumped in and let you words carry me....very nice Dem...I feel you loud and clear...thumbs up
"Raining razorblades" drives the emotion far beneath the skin...bouquet
Dementia
Thank you Leigh. emotional scars are deeper than the physical ones
Poetnumber1
Hi Dementia,a lovely flow,indeed sometimes it takes alot of falling for us to learn such lessons,a sad but a lovely write nonetheless,thanks for sharing this with ushandshake
Dementia
Thanks for the comment Poet#1. You have a lot of wisdom in your views
lorii
wave I love the lines "but it's all my fault, i put myself in these situations
always trusting, loving, thinking I've found the equation" because its so harsh and its how we often feel when we get our heart broken so yep we're so getting married lol because i love everything you write laugh applause

Lorii :) purple heart
Dementia
LOL thanks Lorii. It would be an honor to marry someone with a beautiful soul. Hey we could even play that song "Blood" by In This Moment at the wedding reception. What do you think.dancing
cherryreggae
Well written dementia!! You really capture true feelings of hurt & pain. Thanks for sharing. You have a beautiful heart!!heart1 heart beating purple heart heart wings xx Cherie..
Dementia
Thank you Cherie. You know I always value your opinions on my poems. And thank you for saying I have a beautiful heart. So do you. We both know that.
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