oh hear we go again with another one of my sob stories how i got my heart murdered and was left gory but it's all my fault, i put myself in these situations always trusting, loving, thinking I've found the equation then the sun hides behind a cloud as the storm comes believing every word she said, boy was i dumb i feel numb, i think my heart has had a stroke and suddenly i can't breathe as your words start to choke every last hope i had of you being there for me and now it's raining razorblades, but i was prepared to bleed it's not like I've never been hurt before, you'd think I'm addicted to pain and if so, I'll weather the storm, let it rain, let it rain
Thanks for your comments Red. painful indeed. and thanks for the comment
leigh2154Crossville, Tennessee USASep 18, 2011
Just jumped in and let you words carry me....very nice Dem...I feel you loud and clear... "Raining razorblades" drives the emotion far beneath the skin...
Thank you Leigh. emotional scars are deeper than the physical ones
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 18, 2011
Hi Dementia,a lovely flow,indeed sometimes it takes alot of falling for us to learn such lessons,a sad but a lovely write nonetheless,thanks for sharing this with us
Thanks for the comment Poet#1. You have a lot of wisdom in your views
loriilondon, Greater London, England UKAug 2, 2012
I love the lines "but it's all my fault, i put myself in these situations always trusting, loving, thinking I've found the equation" because its so harsh and its how we often feel when we get our heart broken so yep we're so getting married lol because i love everything you write
LOL thanks Lorii. It would be an honor to marry someone with a beautiful soul. Hey we could even play that song "Blood" by In This Moment at the wedding reception. What do you think.
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"Raining razorblades" drives the emotion far beneath the skin...
always trusting, loving, thinking I've found the equation" because its so harsh and its how we often feel when we get our heart broken so yep we're so getting married lol because i love everything you write
Lorii :)