Down a dirt road, I ride Trying to forget and clear my mind But thoughts are not easy to fade When I remember you say That I am nothing And you want something More than I can give Why do I even live You want someone like me You just don't want me I feel like this disgusting thing You hold your nose up in front of me Like you can't breathe Like I'm the disease Do I mean anything According to you, nothing So as I drive, I think And my heart sinks It's become a bottomless pit Where in all this do I fit
loriilondon, Greater London, England UKAug 3, 2012
Awh so sad dude everytime i read something you've written i can tell how >.< sad you must be sometimes :( dude you're too awsome for just anyone and thats why you may feel umm like you you're not really fitting in.
Thanks Poet for your comment. It's hard to find love but when you love someone and they treat you like nothing is when it really tears a hole in your heart.
And thanks Cafe. Really glad you read and enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comment.
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 4, 2012
Deep poem Dementia.. reflection time is always good.. it reminds you how far you have come..and knowing/finding within yourself where you fit. Felt the words and enjoyed..thanks for sharing.
Hi, Dementia, It's great when the right fit for both is each other; but, painful when it is right for one and not the other. You want someone like me... does make this sad situation a confusing one, too. Thanks for sharing.
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touching write as always :/
Lorii
And thanks Cafe. Really glad you read and enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comment.
Felt the words and enjoyed..thanks for sharing.
It's great when the right fit for both is each other; but, painful when it is right for one and not the other. You want someone like me... does make this sad situation a confusing one, too. Thanks for sharing.