Where Do I Fit

Down a dirt road, I ride
Trying to forget and clear my mind
But thoughts are not easy to fade
When I remember you say
That I am nothing
And you want something
More than I can give
Why do I even live
You want someone like me
You just don't want me
I feel like this disgusting thing
You hold your nose up in front of me
Like you can't breathe
Like I'm the disease
Do I mean anything
According to you, nothing
So as I drive, I think
And my heart sinks
It's become a bottomless pit
Where in all this do I fit
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Posted: Aug 2012

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lorii
uh oh Awh so sad dude blues everytime i read something you've written i can tell how >.< sad you must be sometimes :( hug dude you're too awsome for just anyone and thats why you may feel umm like you you're not really fitting in.

touching write as always :/

Lorii purple heart
Dementia
Thanks Lorii. I was just reflecting on the past when I wrote this one. Appreciate your comments very much.
Poetnumber1
This is a stirring piece Dementia,i guess we have all walked this road but i really do feel for the experience that you went throughwine M.M
cafetwo2010
Goes straight to the heart my friend..Most honest.thumbs up
Dementia
Thanks Poet for your comment. It's hard to find love but when you love someone and they treat you like nothing is when it really tears a hole in your heart.

And thanks Cafe. Really glad you read and enjoyed this one. Appreciate your comment.
LadyMorgana60
Deep poem Dementia.. reflection time is always good.. it reminds you how far you have come..and knowing/finding within yourself where you fit.
Felt the words and enjoyed..thanks for sharing. thumbs up wine
Dementia
Thank you LadyMorgana. Glad you enjoyed it. Welcome back to Poets Corner
madtat29
Hmnnn stirring up some deep old feelings..ty for sharing the write..
Dementia
Thanks for the comment MadTat. Appreciate it.
gnj4u
Hi, Dementia,
It's great when the right fit for both is each other; but, painful when it is right for one and not the other. You want someone like me... does make this sad situation a confusing one, too. Thanks for sharing.
Dementia
Thanks for reading this gnj. I agree with your comment whole heartedly
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