Mans Best Friend Worst Poem Challenge

by DementiaBelmont, Mississippi, USA

May 2012 917 Views 7 comments

Man's Best Friend (Worst Poem Challenge)

I was driving down the road when I heard a plop
My car bounced and I slammed on the brakes to stop
It was a cold rainy night so I could barely see
But there it was, a mangled dog, in front of me
I just stood there watching til his breathing stopped
Felt sick to my stomach as my heart dropped
Got back in my car, made it to town
Went to a local car wash, were no one was around
I washed off the blood and guts as I held my head in shame
Watching his remains go down the drain

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Posted: May 2012

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Comments (7)

kickit22auburn, Washington USAMay 3, 2012

you stirred up a memmory that I wish I could have forgotten. I was a painter for years. I had to remove a birds nest with new borns I used a tappers Knife as I was climbing down the ladder the nest fell off the knife 20 feet below on pavement. only thing left to do was take a hose wash them down the drain on the paved driveway. had momma bird and the rest of the family circling above making these horrible cry's. this just brought back memmories. thanks for that. lol.....

kickit..

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 3, 2012

Hi Dementia,

Ahh!! Now this one has to rate. Very off!!

online today!

DementiaOPBelmont, Mississippi USAMay 3, 2012

Sorry to stir up those memories kickit. Lol.

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAMay 4, 2012

I just caught on to the 'worst poem' challenge and have enjoyed reading a few.... this one has topped all the others thus far!! Very creative and very SAD!!!